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I sat in the car
Waiting for an hour
Waiting for the message to tell me my reservation was ready

And hour passed and I got the message
But no sign of reservation
As it simply said
"There's been a delay"

A delay?
What could possibly halt the process of allowing me to have a table?
I bit my tongue to hide my anger and responded
"How long might this delay be?"

They said they'd check
And be back in a few
More than a few later they returned

With the statement
"45 minutes"

I bite my tongue harder to halt myself from screaming
"Thank you for telling me"
I've sat in this lot for one hour
And now it's another 45 minutes.

I continued receiving messages
Delaying my seat
And I finally got a message
That gave me a chance to leave my car

"Sorry, we're closing up now"
So I left my car
Walked down the street
And screamed loud enough to wake people up in the next town over

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⏰ Last updated: May 13 ⏰

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