" How stupid, am I right? "

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pretty please don't judge this ... 🙁🙏🙏 heavily inspired by a tiktok video so credits to them and this is my first time ever writing woah 🤯🤯🤯 //

i MIGHT do requests ,,

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Ships that may be mentioned:

Saturn x Jupiter ( Guaranteed and Possibly one sided)

Luna x Titan

Tierra x Mars / Venus

Mars x Venus x Tierra

Uranus x Saturn ( Maybe? )

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{ Saturn's point of view } :

I'm in my orbit, just like always. Titan is here, which is good. Nothing out of the ordinary; planets are getting out of their orbit; I don't really care. Something's been racing through my mind recently; it's about him. This is stupid. This isn't worth talking to someone about. But then why is it still bugging me? Jupiter is all I could think about for while; I can't tell whether this thought is good or bad. But it surely sounds stupid.

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{ Jupiter's point of view } :

I'm reading, so and so. My moons are plotting something, but I decided not to burst into their business like that, im not crazy. Im not even sure what the terrestrial planets are doing, they're chatter boxes; I cant care any less. Saturn looks nervous and in his own world, and Neptune and Uranus are.. surely just being theirselves. I'm gonna go ask Saturn what's wrong.

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" Hey, Saturn, You okay? I can see you from my orbit that something is going through your mind. " Jupiter inquired, looking slightly worried.

Saturn had jumped, getting frightened by Jupiter's presence. Then showing assurance that he's okay, " I am okay, I swear. No need to worry about anything. " He exclaimed with a visible small sweat.

Now Saturn was visibly panicked, Jupiter just let go of the fact that it was obvious; by floating back to his orbit of course. Now Saturn really needed someone to talk to, as he went over his options here's what he had decided. The rocky planets, not so much, I mean Earth or mercury would be my best bet with the rocky planets. I surely can't talk to Jupiter about this, he's the one who im gonna talk about, then we have the gas giants, they're not so bad, I guess I can talk to Uranus since he's not far from my orbit, he thought.

Saturn dashed toward Uranus and his orbit, with a scared expression. " Hey Saturn, what's wrong? " Uranus asked. Saturn slowly calming down, but still having that feeling. Saturn stammered " I have this er, weird feeling I suppose. " , Uranus says in response " Ooh? Can you describe what it's about? " Uranus exclaimed. Saturn follows up with " I can't tell whether it's good or bad, it's about Jupiter. He's all I could think about for a while. Now I sound a bit obsessive don't I? " Uranus looks at Saturn, in a slight surprise, having the feeling of probably knowing what Saturn is talking about. " Wait, hold up. Is this a bad or good thing? " Uranus inquired. " Well I wouldn't say bad necessarily. But I can't tell whether it is good or bad. " Saturn had said in reply. Uranus added " Maybe Earth would know, sorry im not good with these type of things. " Saturn showed a slight sad expression then replying with " Oh. That's alright! I'll go ask Earth. Surely the sun wouldn't notice I was out of my orbit, see you around, Uranus! " Uranus smiled at Saturn, " Cya! " waving goodbye.

As Saturn arrived to the Goldilocks zone, he approached Earth then dragging him away from the others to gather privacy. " Earth. I need to talk to you about something. " Saturn said anxiously, Earth was still so confused about why Saturn had wanted to talk to him but agreed anyway. " What is it Saturn ? " Earth had asked Saturn. " Ive been feeling this emotion and I don't know what it means or what I feel about it. " Saturn trembled as those words came out of his mouth. " Just get to the point. " Earth insisted, " I feel like Jupiter is all I could think about, I am sad because I made him annoyed during my search for Titan. But now he's been only running through my mind, in a positive way of course. " Saturn said in a fast pace. Earth looked at Saturn, giggling, " My friend, that is what you call love. Or at least that's what I think you are going through. " Earth had stated, still laughing. " Love? And what does that term mean? " Saturn said in a curious voice. Earth rejoiced " Well.. Love is an emotion, like happy or sad, you can't usually control when it happens. It's an emotion where you care for someone deeply and you want to be around their presence. " Saturn paused, was this really what he was feeling?, surely not, it sounds so stupid but I'll keep talking about it. " I do feel like that when im thinking about Jupiter. Everything about him is perfect. He's smart, kind and beautiful, I've never felt this way. " Saturn had sighed after he said that, it was stupid to him. Earth had jumped in excitement, squealing, " OOOH!!! Saturn is in love!! " Earth still jumping in joy. " If that what this strange feeling is labeled as, so be it. " Saturn had finally stated.

" What do you see in Jupiter? " Earth inquired. " Well, Jupiter is smart, caring, and I personally love his personality. Don't judge me. " Earth paused for a moment " Nahh your good! " Earth then looked behind Saturn, seeing Jupiter while Saturn was on a rant about how much he loves him, Jupiter not even listening. " I literally love him so much, oh my g-. " Jupiter then turned to Saturn making his appearance visible while Saturn was ranting about how much he cares about him, " Hey little Earth and Saturn! " then at the next moment Saturn had jumped in fear due to his sudden approach. " What are you guys talking about? " Jupiter asked, Saturn still pale white. " Oh we're talking about love. " Earth spoke, " . And what is that? Is it some earthling topic? " Jupiter inquired.

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{ Saturn's point of view } :

How could I fall in love with someone who probably doesn't feel the same way? Until then, What happens if both sides love each other? I'll ask Earth later. But I really hope he didn't hear what I said about him, if he did, I'll be terrified. I'm so stupid, " Love " is really stupid.

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" Saturn? Saturnn? Earth to Saturn? " Earth groaned in the process of saying that. Both Earth and Jupiter were staring at Saturn, who was mumbling to himself, Saturn then gains realization and screams " Oh. It's just you two. Sorry. " Earth and Jupiter were still staring at Saturn. " Anyways, when both parties love eachother they can become partners! But if the love is one-sided then good luck cause I don't know what happens then. Oh and to become partners one person has to confess and yeah whatever I guess. "

The tiny Tierra was nervous because he looked puny compared to Jupiter and Saturn, the two gas giants were staring down at him. Jupiter starts slightly giggling due to the information that Earth has provided, " Love is ridiculous, it could never happen, we are planets. " Saturns heart dropped, Earth looks at Saturn, worried. " I knew it. " Saturn mumbled to himself, " I'm gonna go look for Titan cya! " trying to hide the obvious fact that Jupiter clearly wasn't interested in love.

Then, The Sun notices Earth, Jupiter and Saturn out of their orbits, causing him to scream " GET BACK TO YOUR ORBITS!! " with the facial expression that he is about to blast a solar blare at the one terrestrial planet and the two gas giants. " Better go. See you, Earth. " as Jupiter waves goodbye before the sun blasts the solar flare.

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{ Saturn's point of view } :

I sniffled to myself, I can't be seen crying. I mean I always cry and there's people who comfort me and all, but this is different. What if someone asks me what's wrong? I can't just say im okay, Its clear im not.

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HEY FIRST CHAPTER IS OVER!!! I HOPE YOU ENJOYED IT 🙏🙏 this is my first story so correct me. And I might've misunderstood some personalities but I'll still try! 😋😋

REALLY HOPE YOU ENJOYED THIS CHAPTER AND ILL POST MORE I SWEAR.

Word count : 1369

WOW!! / not including these words 😋

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