Rei finally got a 30 day vacation after 7e * 100 Millenia. So she decided to hop to this universe because somebody suggested it might be fun and pretty long too when converted to that verse time. About 10000 years in this universe for only 5 second...
Since I'm mostly new to writing and Date A Live itself (Not actually new to Date a Live as I watch all of it years ago. I just forgor) I decided to post this Chapter for me to fully understand. What am I going to write, what am I going to Fix.
Question 1: Is my transition between scenes good?
Question 2: What can I improve it, Is there any spacing mistakes, is there any inconsistencies?
Question 3: What original name would be Rei's Angel and her Astral Dress (I haven't actually prepared that part yet. What I think her Angel's name would be Jophiel if that's good)
Question 4: How do Realizers and Territories work, what are their suits called, what can they do?
Question 5: Can you give me a rundown with the characters personalities?
I guess that's basically it. I'm active and reading messages from time to time. Also can you point out any mistakes with grammar or any inconsistencies.
Thank you guys. I'll do this chapter only when i'm far from the latest chapter otherwise I'll only update this chapter.
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