Chapter 1 - Camp Cretaceous

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Hey fellow readers...! Okay, look! Sorry, I know this isn't an update for "Eggman Won?!" but hear me out, please! I'm thinking of putting that story on hold for a while to work on this story. I've gotten tired of Sonic Prime, and I need a break from it. I'm FINALLY done with school, what a relief! Anyhoo, just some notes before you begin reading!

This story is basically Camp Cretaceous, with minor changes to dialogue and all the characters are swapped out with Mobians.

Fleetway is Darius, Manic is Kenji, Silver is Ben, Scourge is Brooklynn, Sonic is Sammy, and Shadow is Yazmina. Keep in mind Manic and Sonic are NOT siblings!!

Scourge, Sonic, and Shadow's clothes will be altered. (I just don't see Scourge wearing a pink sweater, or Shadow wearing anything feminine.)

Yes, everyone is out of character! (Duh.)

Alright, let's get on with it! First 5 people to comment = shoutout in next chapter! (Oh, shoutout to SonicandMLPFan!)

A red radar comes to life, two pink dots on a random island.

"Jurassic One, Jurassic One, come in. This is Isla Nublar Base, over." A man on a radio spoke up. The radar slightly glitched.

A woman answered. "Go, Jurassic One."

"Emergency. Hostels in pursuit. Two friendlies in need of immediate extraction." The radar glitched more severely.

"Roger that, Base! On our way."

The scene quickly switched to a camera in red vision, showing two velociraptors screeching before running off. The scene switches again, this time to a first-person POV. Some rustling is heard before a Mobian jumps into view.

A bat sporting a white shirt with rolled-up sleeves, a brown vest, and a tacky hat covered in dirt looks at the screen with concern and fear. "We can't stop here! Follow me!"

With that, the two run, dodging vines and collapsed trees. The Mobian in which we view from first person POV trips and falls to his knees. The bat hides behind a huge boulder and gestures for the Mobian to silently walk to him. "Wait. Wait, wait, wait. Stop, stop, stop, stop..." The Mobian looks around frantically, before turning back to the bat.

The bat wipes his forehead. "I think we lost 'em. We gotta get to the chopper." Suddenly, some dust and dirt falls to the ground from a fallen tree. The two look up to see a velociraptor standing above them. The velociraptor screeches before the two Mobians run off, the Mobian in first person POV swatting vines and leaves away as he runs.

The Mobian turns around to see the raptor roar out a raptor call, two more raptors joining it in chasing after the Mobians.

"Come on!" The bat gestures the Mobian to follow him through the thick grass. The Mobian runs through the thick grass, only to trip and fall to ground. He looks around to see dinosaur bones.

"Raptor bones?" The Mobian asks, before hearing more screeching. He quickly gets up and follows the bat down a drop into a stream.

"Hurry! We're almost at the extraction point!" The bat yells before jumping back to solid ground.

"No! We can use the river to mask our scent and–" The bat ignored the Mobian, only to scream when a velociraptor lunged at him, the other two raptors joining their friend.

The Mobian whimpers in fear, backing up, only to hear loud and heavy footsteps shake the ground. He looks up to see a T-Rex above him, growling.

"Aw, crud.." The T-Rex opens its jaws and quickly leans towards the Mobian, when the screen goes black, and the big "GAME OVER" sign flashes. The menu appears, and a golden hedgehog with a VR headset exclaims: "Dang it!"

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