This is my first fanfic, so criticism is acceptable if it helps me understand what I can improve.
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Prelude: The Beginning
On an exoplanet far from Earth, it is named Copper 9. This terrestrial planet was colonized by JCJeson IN SPAAAAACEE!!!!, and it was one of the many places for mining, manufacturing, and robot research. There was once humanity living on the exoplanet, alongside the worker drones, who humans mistreated most of the time. However, that all changes when, one day, the planet's core suddenly collapses, which results in the extinction of every lifeform that has ever walked on the planet. While that is currently happening, worker drones live on and create society. We will follow one of the worker drones, unique from many other drones, such as encased in a capsule.
[Setting, Unknown Factory]
Inside one of the abandoned factory rooms lies a capsule containing a worker drone. In one corner of the capsule is a timer about to reach zero. It makes a beep sound when it reaches zero, and the capsule opens. This is the beginning of her crazy adventure to discover who she is and how she became a savior of drones.
The drone wakes up to see herself in a dark room. It was empty, and no life could be found around herself. "Where am I?" this now-awaken drone asks. She got up from her capsule and looked around, wondering where she was. She was located in an empty room, and it was a big mess around her. She is curious about what has happened here. "Huh, what has happened here? Wait, how did I end up in that capsule I woke up from." She can't remember what happened to her nor remember her past. "Why can't I remember anything? How did I end up in this situation?" the drone asked. She then found many damaged drawings, one being unique from the others. It looks like a drawing of a drone with the name "Ghot" on it.
Curiously, she looks at herself in the mirror and sees the similarity between herself and the one on the paper. "Huh, at least I remember my name. One step at a time," Ghot announced. "Now, since I am here, I can explore around." She put away the blueprints into her pockets and continued. As she explored around the factory, she saw some skeletons that were once human. "Drag, what happened here to have these things turn into Icy skeletons?" Ghot stated. She looks around the factory and sees many machines no longer in service because no one maintains them. After exploring many rooms, she found one more unique than many others. "Core Room," Ghot read. Ghot decided to check it out. Once inside the vast room, she sees something at the center of the room. It's a green core inside a tube.
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Cryptid Drones
ActionA unique worker drone has woken up from her capsule after many years, after every life on Copper 9 went extinct. However, she doesn't remember who she was and will have to find a way to recollect her memory. As she goes on a journey, she encounters...