Switched between third and first person, My writing isn't very good, Please be nice with your criticism !!
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"Oh, Well...." Sadie stopped for a second "MAZIEEEE" She yelled, A girl almost identical to Sadie but with darker, messier hair and pink streaks in her hair instead of blue like Sadie's, She also wore some black makeup.
"What in sage's name do you want, Sadie?" Mazie angrily called back.
"You know how all the roses are dying and the only place to get them is in flower picker's room?"
"Yes..." Mazie responded
"Well, if I give this girl food can she fetch some roses for us?"
"I mean, I guess." Mazie said, clearly not interested.
"Your just gonna have me go to a possibly dangerous person just for some flowers??" Florence sneered
"Yeah basically, You do want food don't you?" Sadie questioned
"Fine...." Florence said, giving up.
"Anyways go pick your food now" Sadie insisted, even pushing Florence towards it
"Ok ok fine, I'll pick!" Florence berated
A few minutes later the food was served, It wasn't anything too fancy but a Blue strawberry cake and chamomile tea.
"Ok I'm done" Florence called out
"Already?" Sadie groaned "Mazie can't you show her the way I'm on the phone!"
"Fine, but you owe me" Mazie responded
Cliffhanger again lol :3
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The Void (temporary name)
Short StoryA 12 year old girl with amnesia finds herself in sage's world, A limbo for souls who have died wrongly. With the help of the other kids she finds out who she is and helps them escape-With lots of manipulation and drama, Especially from a certain flo...
