Part 4 | DPSAL

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All of this is a completely fictional fan-made and not canon to the actual Blue Archive

Well... Finally, this part is out...

Probably the last one until sometime too. We are one step closer to the actual battle lads, I already have a scene and story planned for that. Eden Treaty had to be my favorite part.

As you can see, this part has a fighting scene which is my favorite thing to do :)

I try to make the onomatopoeia for the gun sound different for each gun, all based on how my ear heard it in a video of it firing in real life.

Do you think it is good or not? I also want to say sorry if this Fanfiction make some Blue Archive Player upset because I decided to make a story about a male character instead of a female character like how I should.

I think it was too boring and too generic so I tried something different, and I think if Blue Archive wants to hold the title of being a friendly community, they shouldn't attack or judge some fanfic because it didn't do what others do.

A good Gacha game community should open its arms and accept those, as long as it doesn't disrespect the original sauce, so others won't view them in a bad way...

Tho I once did ask something about how would they react if there's a male character in Blue Archive, doesn't do well but that's my fault for not asking with the right word, it should be "What would you react if there's a male character in the Blue Archive. In lore (Story of the game) and not in gameplay." Because I also don't want male students in my Gacha game.

The main problem people have with that idea is a ship, and that they would steal the character they love... However when others asked, they didn't receive hate and that much of a downvote that I got... My bad guys, I'm in the wrong here, I can't complain or else I just make everything worse.

I have a friend who makes Girl und Panzer fanfic (Warthunderrager) focused on his male OC and many people seem to like and accept it because it is just a fanmade story. (However, in that case, the idea of males in a female sport that should also be for males is not that original so...)

And there's also a lot of Azur Lane fanfic whose main character is male, in a game where all characters are female... and many enjoy them...

Please forgive me and give me a chance to show what I can do for this Gacha game I truly love. I promise that this story has a good lesson and good intentions...

Chokun Sensei.

Current level: 50.

Sorry, when I ask a simple thing to BA Reddit and see many people hate it, I just feeling down whenever I write this because I fear that people gonna anti and hate me and someday people might know me as that guy who dares to make fanfic with a male character.

I'm still young. Whenever I do something imperfectly, it will be stuck with me forever due to personal reasons... sorry about that...

To the people of the Blue Archive Subreddit who might read this... whether you hate this or like this fanfic. I just want to say that I don't want to be the one that drags everything down and I love all of you, whether you just don't like me, or want me to die.

Yep. It's me. u/Positive-Increase343

And this post right here:

https://www.reddit.com/r/BlueArchive/comments/1ds41lx/what_would_your_reaction_be_if_male_students/

Is it the one that makes me write all of this, go downvote it lol >W<

I put this at the very beginning of this part so many people will see it more.

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