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How are you - kritika asked while wiping her tears....
Mayank - we are very very angry with you, I am not going to talk to you, you are very bad, you left the house because Bhai aur aapki ladai huyi, but you didn't inform us about anything, trust me Bhabhi waha hota toh aapke liye bhai se bhi lad jata, but aapko Jane nhi deta.....
Aradhya - Mayank bhai is right, hum aapko kahi nhi Jane dete, but aap chale gaye, you left us- she said this while sobbing......
I know, I am sorry, but trust me this distance from you guys hurts me the most- Kritika replied......
Then she continued - the time I left the house no one was there, I was missing you guys when a question was put in front of me about my character...... I thought ki kaash, kaash koyi toh Ghar pe hota jo mujh par bharosa karta Bina kisi sawal kiye, I was missing you two, I was missing Papa.....
Author's note- Here Kritika is talking about his father in law, you will get to know about their bonding soon.
Back to the story....
Mayank - yes, you know Bhabhi Papa was very angry at bhai, he even contacted your family in Mumbai but you didn't reach there...
Kritika - I was here in Dehradun with Aarohi, I didn't want to go home, I didn't want to face anyone, although my family knows where I am, but I requested them not to tell anyone about my location, because I didn't want ...... didn't want to face Rudra.
Rudra after listening to this took a deep breath to control his tears....
Aradhya - Bhabhi after you left the house there was almost a rival between Rudra Bhai and Kartik....
Character intro-
Kartik Sharma - Elder brother of Kritika, currently CEO of Devraj Group of industries ( Name of Kritika and Kartik's Late father Mr. Devraj Sharma). Bossy and silent in nature, man of his words, caring and sweet towards his family and loved once. And absolutely opposite to the person who even thinks about hurting his family.
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Author's note- Rudra and Kartik both have dominating and bossy nature, and don't have very understanding relations among each other , it's not like that they hate each other but have little sweet and salty relationships. But after Kritika left Rathore's mansion and Kartik came to know about what Rudra did to his sister, he started hating Rudra. Don't have any hard feelings for anyone else in the family because Rudra became the main villain in his eyes.
Back to the story.....
Kritika - What, but Bhai didn't tell me about anything....
Mayank - He is rightfully angry by the way.
Kritika - did he say something to papa?
Mayank - No, nothing, but relation among Rudra bhai and him is worse right now.
Aradhya - Bhabhi, please come back to us now, please don't punish us for the mistake that Bhai did.....
Kritika while interrupting her in between - hayy, I am not punishing you, I can never ever be angry with you guys, you are My Brother and Sister. Circumstance between me and Rudra will never affect the bond I share with you guys. Tum log mujhse jo marzi mang lo, magar main wapas nhi chal sakti.....
Suddenly a voice came from behind.... Agar hum kahein tab bhi nahi?......
No one can be seen....
Foot steps are coming closer now Suddenly the surroundings became more silent.
After some more steps the man became visible....
Papa..... Kritika murmured with flowing tears.
Character intro- Mr. Harshwardhan Singh Rathore. Man of the Rathore mansion, and the only person that can give orders to Rudra, Rudra controls the power of the empire but Mr. Harshwardhan has the power to control Rudra.
Author's note- In the following story his name will be written as (H/R) because Harshwardhan Singh Rathore is little too big name...
Back to the story......
Kritika ran towards him and hugged him, He hugged her back and then he put his one hand on Kritika's head. Which made Kritika burst into tears.
H/R - enough my daughter, enough, don't cry now, I've promised to your dad that I will never ever let you cry, that old friend of mine will be mad at me from heaven. Saying this he smiled at little making Kritika smile....
Now they are facing each other,
Kritika - how are you Papa, you are doing your Yoga everyday, and how is your diabetes, you go to the doctor for regular checkup right, don't you?
H/R smiles a little more and then replied - My diabetes was in control before but after listening your sweet scolding, my sugar level boosted.
Kritika giggles....
H/R- how are you my child, I am sorry ki jab tujhe meri zarurat thi tab main nahi tha tere pass.
Kritika interrupting him in between- Aap kyu sorry bol rahe ho Papa, isme aapki kya galti, It's my mistake that I didn't inform you, I am sorry
H/R - it's not your fault beta....
Later he continued, let's go home now, it's enough for my daughter to suffer.
Kritika - Papa aap jante hain main aapki koyi baat ko mana nahi kar sakti, phir aap aisa kuch kyu keh rahe hain jo main pura nahi karna chahti, please let me go....
H/R - I know beta you have gone through a lot in these five months, but I also know that this distance is making you suffer more, beta gives us another chance, one last time, trust me if Rudra will not be able to correct his mistakes, I will do whatever you want me to do this time, I will not let my daughter suffer alone now, just give him two months, just two months, if Rudra will not be able to correct his mistakes aur tumhara faisla nahi badla aur tum Rudra ke sath apni life guzana nahi chahogi toh main kud tumhara divorce karwa dunga.....
Papa..... Rudra interrupted.
Enough let me complete first - H/R replied.
H/R continued- Beta I respect your decision of not being with Rudra, but the decision of divorce is big, at least give him a chance, one last time let him proof himself. Give him a chance to prove his love to you. Just two months and your decision will be my decision.
With a pause....
Kritika finally agreed....
Author is happiest right now 🥳🥳🥳 ok back to the story.....
Making Mayank and Aradhya hug her. Rudra hugged his father.
Rudra - thank you so much Papa, thank you so much....
H/R interrupted Rudra in between and said- you know what Kritika is for me, she is not my daughter in law, she is just like my daughter, let me make one thing very clear, one drop of tears from her eyes and I will show you what her father can do.....
Rudra - I love her more than my life, ek baar jo bewakoofi kar chukta hu wo dubara nahi karunga, her tears make my heart break into pieces, she is the blood that flows in my veins, I will do every possible and impossible thing to get her trust and get her back in my life.
Make arrangements to leave.... Rudra ordered his men.
To be continued....
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