Empires Smp Cafe x Highschool Au (Rewrite of ye olde fanfic)

The Problems with this story

Soph here, Immediately I need to discuss the problems with the original story.

First of all the story. well I don't know if you can even call it that because this story doesn't have a plot. It's essentially a ton of ideas I crammed into a book and said was a story. Secondly the charcaters have no developement whatsoever. I spend the book throwing fluff and relationships from characters that haven't had a moment to not be someones partner Katherine is just Shubbles girlfriend the whole book and doesn't get to have a moment to just be Katherine. The only characters that have minor developememt are Scott, Jimmy, Xornoth and Joey and majority of this gets thrown out the window. They all have the same personality unless they have been fleshed out by myself. Here are some of them:

Sausage had one pov chapter. His chapter was a mess and only existed for me to see if I shipped witherhusbands. We learn one thing about him and that is that he is spanish. Thank you google translate.

Lizzie was slightly more fleshed out with her confidence but her romance with Joel kind of through that out the window and we only see this sensible confident side of her and less of the chaotic side that all the charcaters are thinking of her as. When infact she does nothing that would portray her as chaotic at all.

Xornoth was a major problem in my story. He spends that whole book hating Joey and then boom he has a crush. Once they had some flirty moments and Xornoth "Changed" I continued to try and keep his bad bully side of him when he spent a good 5 chapters trying to redeem himself.

I'm going to aim to give these charcters more unique personalitys than just goofy goobers.

Welp this is going to be one wild ride and I hope you'll join me as I try and get back into writing.