Destined By Moonlight

Intro

Hi guys, my names Ellie and I've been wanting to write this for a while and have now started to get it down on paper.

This isn't one of my first pieces but i haven't wrote in a while so excuse me for bad grammar or weird uses of punctuation as I've never been the best at writing.

I would love your feed back and any improvements and edits you think I should make as I am always open to knew ideas :)

Without further a do i shall let you read on.

Heres the description if you didn't read it:

On a moonlit evening, a baby named Airdwarn is left at the Everwood doorstep. Raised without visible magic in a world full of it, Airdwarn’s life changes dramatically on his tenth birthday. During a magical ceremony, his latent powers emerge explosively, shattering his pendant and causing thunder.

Enrolled in a prestigious magic school where he faces prejudice, Airdwarn forms an unlikely bond with Princess Liora, whom he once saved. Together, they uncover secrets about his origins and a looming threat.