DARK ORDER: A star wars story

Prologue

The Galactic Empire has fallen but darkness has spread across the galaxy once more. A dark broadcast heard from every system has revealed that the sinister First Order has risen from the ashes, led by Palpatine's secret successor SNOKE.
Determined to prevent history from repeating itself, Leia Organa has sent a dispatch to all the remaining rebellion troops in the galaxy to come back to battle in order to counter this new threat.
Accompanied by cocky rebel recruit POE DAMERON, Admiral Ackbar, and 10,000 Rebel soldiers, Leia sets course for the old echo base which once held the last rebel alliance....

        The galaxy has been at peace for 30 years without the iron grip of the Galactic empire. After many long and painful years of battle,The rebel alliance had finally won over the remaining Imperials on the planet of Jakku. Everything had been peaceful. Until out of nowhere a large red beam of light flew across the stars. It was seen everywhere, on every planet. It was beautiful, like a large red shooting star. Until  it found a home on the surface of a planet.Everyone watched as the planet crumbled into dust and the debris went everywhere. Nobody knew what planet it was, or where that beam of light came from.
Everyone who saw the planet explode thought to themselves, What could have caused it? The death star has been destroyed for ages, unless they built a new one. But there has been no empire for years, and no knowledge of a new one forming. Mass confusion shook the galaxy and within minutes it had faded away, as if they didn't just witness a planet explode. Nobody really cared as long as their planet wasn't next. But at the same time how would they know if it was or not. Any planet in any system at any point in time could meet that same fate.
             The galaxy laid back and just went about their days. Farmers on Tatooine tended their moisture, Speeder cars flew across the sky on Coruscant, Lava workers continued to siphon lava energy on Sullust, everything was normal.
Until nothing was.
              A large ring sounded over every single planet. It was deafening. Suddenly a loud voice boomed throughout the planets. The voice was deep and raspy, and very frightening. It said, "The Galactic empire may have failed, they may have been too careless, but they are no more. For the might of the First order will now succeed where the pitiful empire did not. As I speak, Star destroyers have been deployed at every single system, they will have total control over this world. Failure to comply will result in punishment as I see fit, any planet that dares resist the will of the First order will meet its doom at the hands of our super weapon, Starkiller base. The planet we destroyed was just a warning shot, there were no people on that planet, but don't mistake that as us not having the bones to use it on you. We are the mighty, the powerful, the brutal First order and we shall crush any-

Resistance"