Inspired stories:
Fgod by harrish8, reborn as error by kiwi_seal and reborn by error_f4n_fr34k
It's almost the same thing, the difference is that it was purposed to error, dream, nightmare and ink fall... What more will happen? Read to figure out
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She grabbed me like a baby and started walking " 𝗱𝗼𝗻'𝘁 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗿𝘆 𝗸𝗶𝗱! 𝗦𝗼𝗹𝗮𝗿 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗹𝘂𝗻𝗮𝗿 𝗮𝗹𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱𝘆 𝗵𝗮𝗱 𝗮 𝘀𝗰𝗵𝗲𝗱𝘂𝗹𝗲 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱𝘆 " ... " 𝘀𝗼𝗹𝗮𝗿?... 𝗟𝘂𝗻𝗮𝗿?... " " 𝗼𝗵 𝗿𝗶𝗴𝗵𝘁 𝘂𝗵... 𝗣𝗲𝗼𝗽𝗹𝗲 𝗵𝗮𝘃𝗲 𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗲𝘀 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗻𝗶𝗰𝗸𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗲𝘀... 𝗡𝗶𝗰𝗸𝗻𝗮𝗺𝗲𝘀 𝗮𝗿𝗲 𝗮 𝗯𝗶𝘁 𝗺𝗼𝗿𝗲 𝗽𝗲𝘀𝘀𝘂𝗮𝗹 " oh... I think I remember them saying something like this " 𝘀𝗼 𝗸𝗶𝗱𝗱𝗼, 𝗜'𝗺 𝘂𝗻𝗱𝘆𝗻𝗲 𝗯𝘂𝘁 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗰𝗮𝗻 𝗰𝗮𝗹𝗹 𝗺𝗲 𝘀𝗲𝗮 𝗼𝗿 𝗿𝗶𝗼 " mmhn.... Interesting... It looks like this universe already has a nickname system... Interesting, Veery interesting
I was thinking so much that I didn't realized undyne trying to give me food... Only to be meet with my Emotionless face in till
" HeY tHeRe BuDdY " wh-... Is she using my toy to... Feed me?
"eAtInG mAkEs YoU sTrOnG.... DoN'T yOu wAnT tO bE sTrOnG lIkE cOoL uNcLe UnDyNe? "
. . . Ok this is just stupid-
I sighed and opened my mouth and I munched... Them
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Oh... Shit I was so amused about the idiotic idea of using the teddy bear that I forgor to control my Strength " 𝗼𝗵... 𝗨𝗵... 𝗪𝗲 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗹𝗹𝘆 𝗻𝗲𝗲𝗱 𝗮 𝗹𝗲𝘀𝘀𝗼𝗻 𝗮𝗯𝗼𝘂𝘁 𝘄𝗵𝗮𝘁'𝘀 𝗳𝗼𝗼𝗱 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘄𝗵𝗮𝘁𝗮𝗸𝗲 𝗻𝗼𝘁..." she murdered
" 𝗼𝗸 𝗸𝗶𝗱𝗱𝗼 𝗜'𝗺 𝗴𝗼𝗻𝗻𝗮 𝗴𝗲𝘁 𝗮𝗻𝗼𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿 𝘀𝗽𝗼𝗼𝗻, 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗱𝗼𝗻'𝘁 𝗲𝗮𝘁 𝘂𝗽 𝗽𝗹𝗲𝗮𝘀𝗲 " " 𝗼𝗵- 𝘄𝗮𝗶𝘁-! 𝗗𝗢𝗡𝗧- " she opened the " cupboard " thingy, she founded zeya...
Undyne quickly screamed and grabbed me "𝘀𝗵-𝘀𝗵𝗼𝗼𝘁... 𝗞-𝗸𝗶𝗱 𝘀𝘁𝗮𝘆 𝗶𝗻 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝗿𝗼𝗼𝗺 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗜 𝘄𝗶𝗹𝗹... 𝗨𝗵 𝗵𝗼𝘄 𝗱𝗼 𝗜 𝗲𝘅𝗽𝗹𝗮𝗶𝗻 𝘁𝗵𝗶𝘀 𝘁𝗼 𝗮 𝗰𝗵𝗶𝗹𝗱 " she murdered the last part " 𝗜 𝘄𝗶𝗹𝗹 𝘂𝗵... 𝗣𝗲𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗺𝗼𝗻𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝗼𝗻 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗰𝗮𝗯𝗶𝗻𝗲𝘁 𝗼𝗸 "she putted me on the room.... This.... May be fun
My smile Widen... And I used my string to talk to zeya
" zeeyaaa~ maybe you could entertaing me a bit. Your objective is to play a bit with undyne in till it gets nightmare's attention... Or dream if he is even in here... Now go... And remember... Don't make a mess and record everything~ " I giggled
Zeya nodded making undyne a bit confused
Then I cutted my Telephaty with zeya,and heard screamings and stuff...
" 𝗳𝘂𝗳𝘂𝗳𝘂~ 𝘄𝗲 𝗵𝗮𝘃𝗲 𝗮𝗹𝗹 𝗻𝗶𝗴𝗵𝘁 𝘀𝗰𝗵𝗲𝗱𝘂𝗹𝗲𝗱 "
386 words wooow
(If it had no response I will take it as a no) Should I do redesign? If I do it would be some spoilers ( with will some spoilers of the few characters I've already did)
