Episode 1 redo script

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Chapter new name: Sick to the Gutter

Box 1

Person 1: have you heard about that marvelous hotel down the road?

Person 2: I heard it has the best booze in all Paris!

Person 3: I wonder was the most expensive rooms look like...

Box 2:
Qian: seriously, we have guest every single day and I can't keep up with it. Makes me sick to the gutter thinking about why they come here.

Box 3
Xylia: don't be such a downer! You always let your emotions out on stupid things. You decided to work here Qian, all for him.

Box 4
Qian: whatever you say. Anyway, what do we have on the list now?

Box 5
Xylia: *holding list* ah.. I'm supposed to be at the front desk.

Box 6
Tala: Xylia, front desk.

Xylia: oh! Coming!

Box 7: ^kisses tala on cheek^

Box 8

Xylia: Qian wen, make sure to clean Mr. Harris desk.

Qian wen: I know.

Box 9

Qian wen stares into a picture of Mr Harris.

What does he hide in this office.

Box 10

*picture on pin board of Darlyyin Wolftook and Jackson Wolftook coming to the hotel in 6 months.*

Long box

What.. *sweats*
He can't be coming, that's impossible. I don't even look handsome enough.. what if he has a wife?! What if he hates me?!

Qian wen: both sides of him talking

Be calm Qian wen. It's just a man

It's not a big deal

It's definitely a big deal!

No it isn't. He will definitely love you.

How do I know that?! No one loves me. Not even myself I can't even-

Tala: QIAN!!!

Box 12

*Qian turns and stays stunned*

Tala: Are you ok? Your sweating and look freaked out.

Box 13: tala turns to picture

Tala: oh yeah, must be stressed since one of the most famous people are coming?

*Qian nods nervously.* yeah.. definitely.

Box 14:

*Tala chuckles patting Qian wen's shoulder*
It's alright man! You remind me of when I met the most beautiful woman for the-

*Qian wen side eyes* I don't want to hear that.

*Tala has an annoyed reaction.* eugh. Alright my bad, well. *She walks to the door*

Box 15

Tell me if you see Lisa. I want to give her something. *Tala reached into her pocket,

Box 16
*the scene doesn't show what she is giving to Qian wen.*

Box 17

*Qian wen's face is confused. He looks up.*

Alright.

Box 18 (end)

*Qian wen sits on the couch. He looks silently at the picture of Jackson and Darlyyin on the wall. He leans back.*

He is just a stupid Jazz singer.. and instrument obsessed freak.

Small box

*Qian wen smiling softly* I really should focus on my work.. than a stupid silly man.

COMPLETE!!

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