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So readers . R u enjoying

Any tips ? That can make it more interesting

Or Suggestions in Writing style

Like long story  or short story

Well my sole purpose is to find good stories on rimuru . If not make one . And since I am new and not a writer. I appreciate suggestions
(Except male x male , Fem x fem . Fem turn to male or vise . Not my kind . )

For twisted world . It is monotone . I feel it once I gave it a read again . So I am again working from scratch to make it good .

My sole objective of making that story was something of that kind . But I feel its boring kinda and didn't went The way I wanted.

You will see the REDO version of Twisted World soon .

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