Redesigning Twisted Astro

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This is the before:

As you can see, It's a total disgrace

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As you can see, It's a total disgrace.
No seriously, Edna didnt die for this </3
NO CAPES- THAT CAP IS A CAPE AND THE BLANKET'S JUST ANOTHER CAPE-

Design changes i said:
Remove the long cap and blanket
Give him more arms
Replace the red sparkle with many multiple eyes
Remove th lobg cap and blanket
And remove the long cap and blanket





Now here is my redesign

Now here is my redesign

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:3

Changes i made:
The many eyes
Shortened his cap and removed the blanket
Gave him more hands
Made him a god
Have him hold the souls of his friends and they dissapear if you've encountered them before astro
(his chances of spawnibg are doubled if you've already encountered a main)

I had his whole body be covered/made of Ichor
Made him literally a god
Made his mechanic being able to cast dreams onto players to stun them and removed his long cap and blanket-
Oh i almost forgot! I removed his long cap and his blanket how could i forget!!

Now i'm to lazy to rewrite his mechanics so i'll show you the skecth

Just tell me which parts you cant read because- well- i wrote too many-

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Just tell me which parts you cant read because- well- i wrote too many-

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⏰ Last updated: Aug 31 ⏰

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