Ansley Coleman put on the beautiful, billowing minidress her mother had given her earlier today slowly and carefully. She then walked down her home's creaky stairs, past a plethora of religious iconography on the walls and over the doors, including artwork of the Virgin Mary, statues of a gory Christ on the cross, and bunches of thorns. Monica, her mother, sat atop the stool in the room to her right - the prayer room. She was dressed in a stunning crimson gown that flowed down to her ankles and jet black heels that made a "click-clock" noise with each step. Father had given her this lovely outfit many years before.
"Oh, sweetheart," her mother exclaimed, "you look lovely."
"Can I see?" Ansley said, anticipating her mother to say "no." Her parents were both against self-indulgence and personal beauty in any form. "You can peek in the mirror when I finish brushing your hair. Today will be quite special."
Her mother brushed her long, dark hair with the brush softly. Ansley's attention was drawn to a portrait of Jesus Christ on the cross that hung on the wall. This vision always bothered her because it appeared as if the Savior was staring directly into her soul. His eyes seemed to scream in pain, his body was covered in blood, and a crown of sharp thorns sliced into the skin on his forehead.
"It's done," her mother replied as she stood up. She then motioned for Ansley to join her. Ansley's mother pulled a key from her pocket, inserted it into the keyhole, and carefully opened the door to the cupboard beneath the stairs. On the other side, a cracked mirror hung, and in it, Ansley saw a beautiful girl in the reflection. It was she who had done it. This was the first time Ansley had ever been
allowed to look in the mirror in her twelve years of life. Her mother slammed the door shut behind her and began an enchantment. "Forgive Ansley for her pride and excess, Lord. Let us never indulge in our own selves, and let us teach others to do so as well. Amen," her religiously zealous mother prayed.
Step, step. "My word, Ansley - you look absolutely wonderful tonight," her father, Mark, walked into the room, clad in a posh suit. Once a year, when her parents went to Midnight Mass, she saw him wear it. She wasn't usually allowed to accompany them, but they said she was old enough this year. She said, "Thank you, Father."
"Are we ready to go, Monica?" It's almost ten o'clock," her father turned his eyes towards his watch. She nodded and led Ansley down the stairs of the house, followed by their father. They all left the house, silently nodding, and climbed into the family's seven-year-old Subaru Forester.
The Subaru stopped into a nearly empty parking lot on the outskirts of town, behind an abandoned factory. Ansley observed a faint light in the middle of the dark woodland that encircled them as she exited. Her father took them through the woods down a dark road that led to the light. They arrived at the light after what seemed like an eternity of walking: a circle of candles encircling three rows of wooden benches, a preacher's pulpit, and a big, wooden cross bearing the word "SIN" engraved in large, red block letters. Mr. Alverson, Dr. Felder, and Mr. and Mrs. Rodriguez were already sitting on some of the benches. They were all attendees at her family's tiny church - ironically, Our Lady of Sin.
The minister had told her it was because Mother Mary washed away their transgressions with her son's blood, therefore taking on the sin of the world as Christ did.
It must've been a typo.
But who would be ridiculous enough to write that?
Her father beckoned for them to take a seat in the right-hand first row. Ansley turned back to see the retired Columbian professors Mr. and Mrs. Strinati, Dr. Beckett - an annoying geezer with a nasally voice - as well as sweet old Ms. Hart... all coming down the same road she had come from. She noted that all the women were dressed in black gowns similar to her mother's and that all the men were dressed in suits similar to her father's. Ansley fidgeted anxiously.
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Mystery / ThrillerFaith demands a sacrifice. In a devout and tightly controlled household, twelve-year-old Ansley is raised to believe in strict religious values. When her parents invite her to a mysterious midnight ritual, she's eager to prove her devotion. But as...