The Final Gate Reworked

Sickness?

"Good morning!!!. New day new luck let's see what will happen today. I hate having to wake up so early for College It's sooo annoying. Welp I am just going to stop yappin and get to work. Just packing up my things, my food and stuff. Food is the most important thing beside Drinks, especially water. I am going to stay hydrated it is important."

*Gate packs his school stuff and starts walking to his College*

*On his way to College*

Hmm.. I am not sure why but today is a weird day. Like everything is fine but there is this feeling. Which makes me uncomfortable. I feel like something will happen, not sure what it is but it's not going to be a good thing. Well I might just mentally prepare for College, let me just get my headphones on and go

*Puts on his headphones*

*Walks to College*

*As he passes the Pond he remembers the dark Crystal*

"The dark Crystal was here yesterday. That Crystal was sooo shiny it catched my eyes just from looking at it from further away.

*Gate got tooo focused on this & went into the pond to look for the Crystal. He forgot about his College*

It was right there when I saw it yesterday where did it go? I can't find it

*Gate searches for 15-20 mins*

Okay this is enough I will go to College now
*Angry noises*

*Gate arrives at College late*

*Gate's Teacher is shocked*

*Liz is surprised too*

Gate's Teacher: "Gate you never came tooo late, how are you so late today? And it's quite some time like 1 hour late"

"I am sorry I lost my pencil case on my way without noticing and went back to get it. Good thing it was still there when I found it."

Gate's Teacher: "alright sit down. You are going to get into trouble but not right now"

*Teacher continues to teach the students*

*Gate sits down*

Liz: "Hey Gate how are you? Are you good? How come someone like you come too late?

"I don't know myself Liz I don't really want to talk about it, can we do it later because I feel sooo tired. I am going to sleeeeeeee~

Liz: "alright but don't make it obvious, sorry"

*Gate falls asleep*

*10 mins later with no movements from Gate*

*Liz tries to focus on the board*

*Teacher explaining a lot*

Liz: what's happening to me I feel so tired. Idk why but I feel like I can't concentrate today.

Liz: let me just continue & try to focus on the lesson

*Gate's body moves slightly*

*Liz didn't notice since she is trying to concentrate*

*In the next moment gate falls if his chair*

Liz: "Woooooww woow wait what???"

*Liz is really shoked*

*The whole class gets really quiet and everyone goes to Gate.*

*While some try to get him up again others call the ambulance for him*

*Liz couldn't call the ambulance because she was just frozen in place. She was dealing with so many emotions*

*Gate shows no response despite all efforts the class made*

*A bit later the ambulance arrives and takes Gate to the hospital because his blood values are crazy. "At this point he shouldn't be alive anymore"*

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