Chapter 1: The Last Visitor

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Marianne didn't think much of the house when she first saw it. It was old, tucked away at the end of Hollow Hill, and for years, no one had dared approach it. The locals said it was cursed, but Marianne had been through enough in life not to care about superstitions. All she wanted was solitude-an escape from the wreckage of her life.

The house was perfect for that.

The first weeks after moving in, Marianne embraced the quiet. No more city noises, no more judgmental eyes or whispers behind her back. The isolation was a balm, though the house creaked and groaned at night, as if settling its old bones. The peeling wallpaper, dusty floors, and long-forgotten furniture gave the place an eerie charm. It was peaceful, or at least it should have been.

But Marianne's peace wouldn't last.

It started with the sound of footsteps-soft and slow, creeping through the dark halls. At first, she thought it was the house settling, perhaps rodents scurrying between the walls. But these steps had weight, rhythm. They moved with intention. She dismissed it. She was tired, stressed. Isolation did things to the mind, didn't it?

Then came the knocking.

It was faint at first, almost imperceptible, as if someone-or something-was tapping at the very edges of her awareness. At night, it grew louder, more insistent. One night, she couldn't ignore it any longer. She followed the noise, candle in hand, down the creaking staircase to the front door.

Tap. Tap. Tap.

She hesitated. There was no way anyone could be at the door. No one came to Hollow Hill. She had chosen the house precisely for its isolation. Still, the knocking continued, relentless and deliberate. She swung the door open in frustration.

There was no one there.

The dark night stretched out before her, thick with fog. The trees loomed like specters, their branches clawing at the sky. But no visitors. She stepped outside, her breath visible in the cold, crisp air. She felt a shiver race up her spine, but it wasn't from the chill.

"Stop being ridiculous," she muttered, closing the door.

That night, she couldn't sleep. Every time she closed her eyes, she heard the faint knocking, sometimes closer, sometimes farther. It was always there, just at the edge of her consciousness, as if daring her to acknowledge it.

It wasn't until a few days later that the voice came.

At first, it was nothing more than a whisper in the silence-a low, rasping sound that seemed to curl out of the shadows. She dismissed it as her mind playing tricks on her. But the voice grew louder, more persistent.

"Marianne."

She froze.

"Marianne."

It wasn't just a whisper anymore. It was a man's voice, soft yet commanding. It felt familiar, as if it had been calling her for years. But that was impossible.

"Come downstairs."

Her body moved before her mind could stop it, as if she were being drawn by invisible hands. Down the stairs, into the hallway, her candle casting long shadows across the floor. She could feel something watching her-something just out of sight.

The voice came again, this time from behind her.

"You can't ignore me anymore."

She spun around, her heart hammering in her chest, but there was no one there. The hallway was empty, save for the dim flicker of her candlelight bouncing off the cracked walls.

"Who's there?" she demanded, her voice trembling.

There was no answer. Just the sound of her own rapid breathing and the distant creak of the house settling. She tried to shake off the fear, to convince herself it was all in her head. She was alone. She had to be alone.

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