This isn't my first story I've ever written, but it's the first one I've ever published, and while I think there are definitely going to be some cringy moments, I believe overall the writing style and wording will be smooth.
There will be a lot of paragraphs, because that's how I prefer to group my writing, and it's just my overall style, however I know from personal experience that reading from your laptop and reading from your phone are two different experiences especially with long paragraphs, so if it becomes too much do let me know.
Other than that, if you like the story, feel free to let me know, I love feedback and comments, whether it's sarcastic, angry, or heartfelt. Love you all!!!
YOU ARE READING
Love in the Underworld
RomanceElliana does nothing but study. In order to go to college she has to maintain her GPA due to her dependency on a scholarship. Damien leads one of the most dangerous mafias in the Americas. He is feared by everyone he walks by and is known for being...