I Look up mustering the strength to see a wide, toothy-grin on his face. He wears a blue hoodie, a white t-shirt underneath, black shorts with white stripes, and a pair of slippers. His eyes empty but with a single dot in the center assuming its his pupil. His stands over me; his shadow covering me entirely I'm unable to make out what monster he is. He stares down at me, and with a slight drawl and creepy voice, he says,
???: ... You should be careful, H U M A N... Lazing and sleeping around could get you caught by the royal guards. And not to mention... You can get really hurt.
Polly: Haa... Haa... Heh, I'll be fine.I get up using the tree as assistance, I walk ahead; past him. "What's happening to me? This feeling... it's similar to when I had those memories and that "Zell" guy in my head," I contemplated. Swaying a little from side to side as I walk to see up ahead a bridge across with a gate too wide to stop anyone. As I do, that very person follows right behind me.
???: You know... I'm supposed to on watch for humans and capture them.
Polly: Really? Haa... Haa... Well, i'm vulnerable, right now.
???: Yeah, but I don't really care about capturing anybody but now my brother, Papyrus... He's a human-hunting FANATIC.
Polly: Should I be afraid?
???: Fear is subjective in this case but me personally, I think you should. He's a very, scary, and awesome, guy.
Polly: ... Ha, I don't believe you-Erk!I make it to the bridge and lay against the gate's pillar. I get sudden flashes of memories, I hold my head. "Memories..." I thought.
???: Hey, human, 'you okay? Your lookin' a lil wobbly...
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A memory flickers in my mind like an old VHS tape. I see a kid with long silver hair and a flowing green scarf, standing on a wide, snow-covered wooden bridge. The bridge stretches over a frozen river, its icy surface glimmering faintly in the winter light. Then, I notice a small hand—my hand, but younger. In it, I'm holding a snowball, and just as I'm about to throw it, the silver-haired kid runs up and pelts me with one first. The impact knocks me down into the snow, but I scramble back to my feet quickly. Just as I prepare to retaliate, the memory freezes and shifts.
Suddenly, I'm somewhere else, watching two children laughing and playing at a picnic, drawing and coloring. Then another memory flashes before my eyes—a weight in my arms. I'm carrying an unconscious child, tears slipping from my eyes, falling one by one as I struggle to keep going.
Before I can process it, the memories fade, and I'm left standing in a space filled with nothing but darkness. A voice echoes around me, pulling me back to reality.
??: You're weird... You peek into things that have nothing to do with you...
Polly: Who are you-
??: It's not your fault either... Truly, you are pitiful.
Polly: Just tell me who you are!
??: Remember the name of who is true... And the origin of your strength... Chara, "The First Fallen Human."
Polly: So, that means your the one in Toriel's book.
Chara: ... Before you go you should know... Beware the man-
Chara's voice is cut short when I hear Mani's voice calling my name.Mani: Polly... Polly...! Polly!
Polly: Beware who!?... W-what... Mani!? Where's Chara?
Mani: Chara?... Oh! The kid in the book! But... You met them?
Polly: Was it a dream perhaps?I contemplated for a moment and saw the figure appear in front of me again but this time his pupils disappeared and the stuck and still wide smile on his face.
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Polly's Eternal Adventure (P.E.A)
Fanfiction"What is Truth? What is Freedom? What is Malice? Who am I?" Polly's journey is one of endless battles, moral dilemmas, and existential questions. This story dives deep into the heart of a character caught between humanity, monstrosity, and the unkno...