Hi! This is the first poem I'm uploading here. I'd really appreciate any kind of advice or feedback!
Clarifications: This poem isn't about me nor for some crush of mine or a real person. This poem is about a WIP I've been writing. Also, English is not my first language, but I'm doing my best to improve and learn more about it. I apologize if there's any mistake.
Hope you like it!
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(Idc if the poem isn't bout bsd, I needed to put this)