The A/N:
On top of a bit of writers block I've had a bit of a lack of creative flame for this story... I know it's my first and I didn't expect much of it - in fact, it's already far surpassed my expectations (gained me 2 followers and and a new friend) - but with a lack of inspiration for this story I'd rather wait till I can do something good for it rather than finish it half-assed so... Expect the end of this story to come slow
Also, I noticed that I get more views than the usual 2 or 3 that vote or comment. To those of you that read and say nothing.... You are very unhelpful. If you thought it was shit, tell me it was shit (but at least tell me what you didn't like about it). If you thought it was great, tell me it was great (and what you liked about it). But really, what I like the most, is when people do BOTH. Tell me what you like ANDY what you don't like, that is the most helpful!
Questions:
1.) On a scale of 1 - 10, rate the story thus far. Things such as depth of character development and interesting plot should be considered here
2.) How do you think I could improve on my writing style, if at all?
3.) How do you think the end will happen? I was sure to hide foreshadowing, so those who read carefully and thoroughly should know ;)
4.) Should I do more A/N?
That's all guys! This is not usually my style. I honestly did this off of a whim assuming that the people that read are interested in it. Of course, refer back to question 4 if you feel these are good or bad.
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