Hey everyone! I just noticed I skipped some parts of the hypnosis in Chapter 11, especially since the chapter was centered around it. I checked and found out I didn’t include the whole hypnosis process, only wrote the girl’s part. Actually It was my first time writing hypnosis scene and I wrote all that by myself not used any reference or watch video how it performed step by step I just done my blah blah cause of which I not wrote the whole scene in sequence and wrote few versions . when I suppose to add the full scene in the chapter , I not noticed and only added the part where I explained about when she saw the girl .
It’s not a major change, but if you're interested, I’ve added the complete hypnosis part from the beginning. See it is nothing but give more clarity about what I showed in first scene, I didn’t think it was necessary to delete the whole part and repost, so I’ve just updated that section. Again, it's not crucial, but if you’d like to, you can check it out!
Thanks for your understanding, and have a great day! ❤
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Stepdad's Obsession
Romance"Shh, do you want her to see us doing this" he said and pushed himself deep inside me. he pressed his hand harder on my mouth to stop me from making noise. My body shook with his sudden doing he smirked and came closer I turned my face in fear he w...
