Rent-A-Girlfriend REWRITTED: Chapter 1.

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"Hi, i'm Kazuya Kinoshita, a 21 years old student who is going on a date with the prettiest woman on earth, and also my girlfriend, Mami Nanami, i had been dating her by pretty long but right now i'm going to confess and ask for his hand on marry, this is gonna be the best day of my life!" - Kazuya Kinoshita, an student of 21 Years old, his actual girlfriend is Mami Nanami.

Minutes later at the date.

"Hey Mami, i wanted to say something very, very, VERY IMPORTANT." - Kazuya said, Mami looking a little bit duzzy and why to lie, something bad. "Yeah Kazuya, i also wanted to tell you something... It's-" - Mami gets interrumped by Kazuya, "Lets said at the same time, at the count of three!" - Kazuya said.

1! 2! 3- "I wanted to break up with you Kazuya because i find someone better, you are a sweet caring boy but i just don't like you nevermore, i'm sorry!" - Mami says before running away leaving Kazuya with his heart destroyed, a silver ring on his hand, and a tear on his eye.

Kazuya runs away crying into his apartment, but he stops at his door when he hears a big bump on his neighbour nextdoor, Chizuru Mizuhara, Kazuya stops crying and when he goes to check...

The door opens showing Chizuru using a cute dress, "Oh i'm sorry, i hearded a big bump and i wanted to check." - Kazuya said blunty, just saying what he were going to, but his nextdoor neighbour reaction is completly different. "You were going to enter on my apartment, isn't like that? Thats disgusting you know?" - Chizuru said, leaving Kazuya's heart even worse, this is his first interaction with his neighbour on months, what did he did. Chizuru doesn't even matters about Kazuya's feelings and just leaves, Kazuya enters in his apartment, Kazuya messages a text to his friend's group chat talking about how he got dumped by Mami, then one of his friend recommends him a date app, "Diamond", Kazuya checks the app, but his naughty mind is giving him a really hard time, thinking about Mami and his new boyfriend, these two doing things, this hurts Kazuya because he never even had seen Mami on underwear, some minutes later Kazuya notice that the app haves a service of Rent-A-Girlfriend, Kazuya practically being rich decides to pay this service, looking at some girlfriends to rent, but, he can't find nothing that interest him, until he checks on recommended, he finds a girlfriend, five stars, cute, funny and caring, Mizuhara, Kazuya smiles to himself, deciding to apart a date with her on saturday, at 7:45 PM, "Mizuhara" accepts to apart a date with him, Kazuya is happy, so he takes a break, cooking, washing his clothes, he knows this is just a rent service, but he decided to take "Mizuhara" at the best restaurant to try and make her fall in love with him.

Saturday, 7:40, Kazuya arrived five minutes earlier to the date, waiting for his date, he check on his phone and all that, when he hears a sound, "Skeeerk", the chair in front of him did, he turns his head up and... "K-KAZUYA!? YOU ARE KAZYU-SAN? WHAT ARE YOU DOING... You are stalking me aren't you...?" - Chizuru said, Kazuya stunned by the situation, and he talks up. "Oh, wait, hold on! This doesn't look like that, i was sad because my girlfriend call Mami broke up with me, so i wanted to... you know, have a date and spend time with some dream girl, i'm suprised of you." - Kazuya said and Chizuru is suprised about his blunt, Chizuru speaks. "I'll stay here, because its only my job, we are nothing, i'm just doing my-" "Your job? This is practically being almost a slut i mean, no offense, but, you know, i'm nothing without Mami anyways..." - Kazuya said, interrumpting Chizuru's sentence, Chizuru is a little bit stunt by what Kazuya said.

The next of the date transcurr in a normal way, but almost when is time to leave, Kazuya phone vibrates on his pocket, he checks, its a message from his parents, he reads the first line and runs away, Chizuru, shocked, runs after Kazuya don't understanding whats going on.

Mom: "Your grandma is worst, come to the hospital, we are waiting for you, Kazuya."


Kazuya meanwhile running, doesn't know that Chiruzu is running behind him, Kazuya is almost breaking down, first Mami, later Chizuru hating her and calling him a creep and now his grandma, this is the worst that could happen to a boy, he keeps running, Chizuru doesn't care and keeps running behind him, Kazuya enter the hospital and storms in his grandma room.


Nagomi Kinoshita (Kazuya's grandma): "Gotcha! Hahaha, i'm not going to die today little Kaz-Kaz, but you have to know that i'll keep torture your little little mind, hahaha.

Kazuya sighs, knowing its just a way to show gratitude for coming in her room, but then his mom talks.

Kazuya's mom: "Hey Kaz, and that girl?" - Kazuya get stunt and freezed before turning around to see Chizuru, sweating, blushing and heavy breathing. "T-this, sh-she's j-ju-" - Kazuya gets interrumped by Chizuru, "I'm her girlfriend." - Everyone gets stunt on the room, obviously not Chizuru, but she's blushing heavly, Kazuya turns around and he sees a female shadow behind Chizuru run away, he freaks out but doesn't give some much importantly.


Hours later, the two lovebirds arrive home, Kazuya walks to his room, Chizuru does the same.

A few minutes later, Kazuya walks into his balcony, and hears Chizuru moaning or groaning like "Agh, uhh, ugh." So he leans to see whats going on, but then Chizuru shouts at him. "You are a pervert! You wanted to see me on a bra-" "WHY I WOULD LIKE TO SEE YOU ON UNDERWEAR!" - Kazuya shouts interrumpting Chizuru then Kazuya pass onto the Chizuru's balcony, the tension grows on a sexual and ecchi way, Kazuya looks around, Chizuru decides to stay still not wanting to say something out of place, but then Kazuya walks into Chizuru, but there was piece of clothes making Kazuya falls into Chizuru's chest, Chizuru blushes and starts to get flustered, Kazuya steps back trying to sorry for falling onto Chizuru's breasts, Kazuya feels dying, of course, is not Kazuya's fall that Chizuru haves a lot of dates and can't even order his own room, Chizuru hits Kazuya, this one almost falling from the balcony but grabs Chizuru's hand at time, but his falls onto him, pinning him down, Kazuya is not flushing or blushing, he's just want to die, Chizuru gets dizzy not wanting to move. "Chizuru could you get up from me? Please? Its annoying, its not even a good way to start an erotic shit, please, stand- stand u-up, i can't, i can't take it, i just... I just can't, i still in love with Mami... I'm sorry." - Kazuya says, leaving Chizuru upset, Kazuya jumps back to his balcony, Chizuru sits on her bed, asking why Kazuya is being that cold with such a cute girl like her. Kazuya can't stand the feeling that he's betraying Mami by being with Chizuru, but, he broked up with her, isn't like that, he can do whatever he wants, he drifts off on a sleep, Chizuru checks her phone, she calls a friend and chat for a while. "Hey Ruka, about the Rent-A-Girlfriend service on Diamond, you could try, you know, i could get you some dates, talk me back if you are interested." Chizuru throws her phone away and lies onto her bed wanting to finally sleep.


-- END OF CHAPTER ONE -- 


Hello Varcry here, i'll just say that this is whole fan fiction, i'm trying to make a better interaction between characters making more natural the interactions, and most important, this is my first rewritte, i'll keep working on it, but if i see people enjoy to see my rewrittes i could do some others of anothers anime's like Nagatoro, Tomo-Chan, Takagi-San, etc. BTW, this is not like a "Setting things straight with the brats" I mean, that manwha is one of my favorites but this rewrite is not for shit like "ooh i'm edgy i hate brats, i sui****, i hit her." What i mean for this? I just wanted to make Rent-A-Girlfriend a lot more easy and not that fucking annoying, C'ya next time!


- Varcry.

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