I'm thinking of making a rewrite of this. I feel as though I've written myself into a corner and just have better ideas as to how I could write this AU. I'll release the draft for the chapter but I've already written some for an idea I have so I'll write it here. Please tell me what you think.
Kokichi/The Collector POV
Ok, perhaps going to the human realm was a bad idea. He had thought that it was peaceful and nice there, because of how Luz had described it, but when he came, he got into this school somehow and now someone is dead! Now there's a time limit to find all evidence that you can that points to who the culprit is! Although it would be good as a fiction story, he knows now that it isn't fiction.
Memories of Luz dying replay in his mind. He wants to cry. That's all he wants to do. He would usually do that, but he has taken on the role of the 'bad guy' and he can't stop now. Luz had taught him what things make people suspicious of others so he knows that would make him suspicious.
Shuichi POV
I talk to Keade about what we had just seen and stuff (Rantaro's body) and out of the corner of my eye I see Kokichi looking pale. He seems out of it. I may not have know him for long yet, but he seemed so cheerful and playful.
"Shuichi? Is something wrong?" Keade says, snapping me out of my thoughts.
"I'm fine, Keade, it's just... Kokichi looks so pale, even the others didn't go pale when they say his body" I say
"Let's go talk to him!" Keade says hopefully
Kokichi/The Collector POV
"....chi!" "K...chi!" "Ko..chi!" "KOKICHI!" I snap out of it, looking at Shuichi and Keade
"Do you need anything Saihara-Chan~" I say playfully, trying to hide my true emotions
"Are you okay Kokichi?" Keade says, reminding me of Luz somewhat, I shake the thought out 'No, they're not that similar.'
