Bree and chase love story part 2

Chapter 8

Lexi- my boyfriends name is Daniel miller
Billy- my girlfriends name is Emma Alonso
Austin- and my friends name is Andi Cruz
Chase- nice to final know ur names
Daniel- yea Lexi said she wanted to tell u guys our names so I said ok
Bree- ok well what would u guys like to eat Chinese
Everyone- yes
Bree- ok
Emma- hey andi can I talk to u for a sec
Andi- sure outside
Emma- yea I'll be back Babe
Billy- ok
Andi- I'll be back austin
Austin- ok
Chase- if u like her and se likes u y don't u just ask her out
Austin- cause I'm waiting for the right time and I know when
Chase- ok
Bree- hey sweetie I need to talk to u in our room
Chase- ok
(Bree and chase leave)
(Our side with Emma and andi)
Emma- ok look I have a wonderful boyfriend I really do but u know that new kid jax Novoa he keeps texting me I kinda like him but I love billy to
Andi- don't listen to ur mind listen to ur heart
Emma- ur right andi I've been dating billy for like 1 year almost well we didn't won't anyone to find out till bow
Andi- yea I know that's cute tho all of us go to the same school that's cool but anyway jax got here 3 months ago and ur already having feels
Emma- I know but I don't know my head says jax my heart say billy
Andi- there u go billy is ur answer if I was in ur situation id pick billy but it's ur decision not mine
Emma-I just got 5 new messages from jax omg
Andi- call him an speak with him tell him that ur at ur boyfriends house but u know billy and jax don't get along
Emma- I know they don't cause they both like me duhh
Andi- call him and sleek with him
Emma- ok tell billy I'll be there in a minute
Andi- ok
(Phone call)
Jax- Emma I'm happy to hear u
Emma- jax I'm at my boyfriends house I'm going on vacation with him please don't text me or anything maybe u should move on
Jax- never I'll leave u alone I'll text u later bye
Emma- bye
(Inside)
Bree- let's eat
Everyone- ok
Chase- umm we are canceling our trip to our family's house maybe u guys can meet them next time do u guys won't to go have fine like swimming tomorrow
Everyone- yes
(Emma's phone rings)
Emma- excuse me please
Everyone-sure
(Emma answers)
Emma- hello
Jax- Emma I love u I need u please date me
Emma- jax really omg I do like u but I love LOVE billy
Jax- please date me
Emma- no maybe another time ill see u at school Monday no school tomorrow
Jax- fine
(They have fun all weekend)
*•Monday•*(at school)
Jax- hey Emma
Emma- jax not again
Billy- hey babe and jax jax- so Emma do u still won't to go out with me
Billy- wow back off dude she's my girlfriend
Emma- BOTH OF U STOP!!
Jax- please Emma
Billy- Emma were dating
Emma- I know billy I uh omg look I'm braking up with u billy
Billy- what
Jax- so ur single
Emma- yes but I need time to think both of u guys meet me in my last period I will choose who I won't to be with
Billy- ok
Jax- good with me
(Last period, no ones in the room but them 3)
Emma- ok I chose who I won't to be with and I know for sure I picked the right one
Jax- who is it?
Billy- please just say it already
Emm- I picked.. I picked billy
(Billy kisses Emma)
Emma- jax I'm sorry but I love billy more than anything in my life I won't to marry him and have kids with him I know deep down my heart me and billy belong together
Jax- it's fine we still friends
Emma- friends
Billy- I'm so happy u picked me
Emma- me to we belong together
Jax- oh and Emma one last thing
Emma- sure
Jax- I have a crush on u and andi do I think she will date me
Billy- sorry but she's already taken by my brother austin
Jax- oh hey billy is ur sister single
Billy-not really she's dating Daniel
Jax- ok bye
Emma,billy- bye
(At home)
Billy- dad I'm taking Emma out to the movies
Chase- ok but no pregnancy
Billy- dad we know
(Billy Emma leave)
Daniel- sir may I have ur permission to take our ur daughter for a date
Chase-u may just take good care of her
Daniel- I will
(They leave)
Austin- dad I'm taking my girlfriend out to walk and just chill
Chase- wait who's ur girlfriend?
Andi- me
Chase- u guys finally together ok have fun not to much fun
Austin- ok bye
(They leave)
Bree- hey would u like to have a lone time with ur wife
Chase- oh I sure will
(Upstirs)
Bree- (pushes chase on the bed) u sit on there
(Unbuttoning her shirt)
Chase- I like what I see
Bree- good
(Bree gets on top of chase, bree takes off chases shirt he's Shirtless, chase unhooks brees bra)
Chase- I like what I see
Bree- that's good
(Chase takes off Bree's shorts and underwear and chase takes off his pants and boxers and they make out maybe a little beyond make out, chase kisses every inch of her body and bree moans ther like that for 3 hour)
(Later on that day they have a good sleep over and have a good night sleep)

How's my chapter now? I bet u guys think it's stupid and not good. Please comment to know if I'm doing good with my brother. Should I end it early or not?