🖤a new start?🧡 chapter 1

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* is for action
" is for talking
[ ] is for time skip
"YELLING"
A/T author talking

Let's just get into this already! =]

⚠️WARNINGS FOR THIS CHAPTER⚠️
animatronic crying oil :]
Some swearing but a letter is blurred

⚠️WARNINGS BEFORE READING THIS BOOK⚠️
I'm learning off of writing this book cause I'm new but also not really new to writing full on books cause I wrote a single one-shot chapter and 2 very small chapters of this book before I even decided to remake it
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No ones POV:
Eclipse battery is on 20% as he thinks about all about what he has done to sun,moon and luner in unbearable pain wishing it would stop and just die already. soon 2 weeks go by, his battery has finally ran out.

[2 months later? I think?like 4 days before What ever time the backup of eclipse was about to get yelled at from the play structure?]

Creators POV:
The creator was wondering around the veRy fAr aWAy fOrESt (don't ask why-) untill he came across eclipses vary badly beaten up body that was unfixable
"Oh? What do we have here?" *the creator kicks eclipses body and bends down picking eclipses basically dead body and carrys him to his very secret base*

[2 hours later of walking to his base]

No ones POV:
Once the creator got there he layed eclipses ruined body down on a surgical table taking eclipse head and turning it to the side roughly ripping the memory chip out almost rough enough to break it and taking the still good parts which are like some of the wires and personality chip that is slightly broken then throwing eclipse body away and starts on a new one

[2 days later]

Creators POV:

I finally finished eclipses new body it is just about a foot taller then lunar cause I was lazy and decided to make it a smaller model i even gave it hair- *sigh* "now I have to call Fazbears and say its done and totally not partially apart of a animatronic (eclipse) that i found in the woods (>,<) that is narcissistic and a sarcastic bish! Probably should have wiped out his memorys- eh! Whatever more fun for me to watch eclipse suffer!" I pick eclipses unconscious body up and take him to the daycare which took about 2 hours to get there- putting a tag on eclipse that says 'his name is echo moons replacement - totally a fazbear worker'

[1 hour later]

Suns POV:
I jump down from the tower landing into the ballpit getting out and going to clean the barrels humming until I come to a stop seeing a charging powered off animatronic freezing in my steps yellin

"MOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNN" *sun says sounding nervous* "WHAT DO YOU WANT!???" *moon yells from his room up in the tower* "umm...THERES A N-NEW ANIMATRONIC APARENTLY NAMED ECHO THAT LOOKS K-KINDA LIKE ECLIPSE CHARGING AND UNPOWERED BY THE SUCERITY DESK!! SUPPO-SUPPOSELY IS YOUR R-REPLACEMENT" *sun yells out to moon while reading the note supposedly left by a fazbear worker?* "..." *moon comes running down quickly almost tripping down the stairs taking a look at the animatronic  named ecli- i mean echo and checking the data base seeing if echo is in it seeing he is there "...seems like I have a replacement now...GREAT WE DONT EVEN HAVE ROOM FOR THE DAMN THING!!" *moon says banging his fist on the desk and looks at the yellow smiling animatronic* "u-umm m-moon s-should we turn h-him on or...." *sun says stuttering a bit kinda nervous*
"...no not yet not untill I figure out what to do with this pathetic looking thing and where to shove it" *moon says sounding pissed off about it* "....i- um- okay.." *sun says still nervous and notices ecli- I mean echo starts powering on signaling moon* "oh GREAT NOW IT TURNS ON THE MOMENT I SAID WAIT UNTIL I FIND OUT WHAT TO DO WHITH IT!" *moon says very pissed of sitting in the computer chair*

Eclipses POV:
I power on felling very tired and worn out I look up and see a very pissed off moon and a nervous sun moon yelling "oh GREAT NOW IT TURNS ON THE MOMENT I SAID TO WAIT UNTIL I FIND OUT WHAT TO DO WITH IT!" *startling eclipse/echo his eyes widening wondering how he is still alive his mind wondering for about 10 minutes until sun yells* "echo?...ECHO!!" *I snap out off thought and look up standing up seeing i feel no pain and feel shorter looking down at myself seeing i was rebuilt by someone but who? I thought looking back up at moon and sun moon just staring at me pissed off which for some reason makes me get all sensitive and start tearing up oil? WTF IS THIS!? IS MY PERSONALITY CHIP BROKEN OR SOMETHING!??* "WOW WOW HEY HEY calm down!your okay!" *sun says bending down taking echos hand not knowing its the original eclipse and moon looks surprised about this not expecting this small animatronic to be a crybaby* "HAH looks like we got ourselves a crybaby? (Moon does not mean that in a romantic way I know how some of you are-)" *moon says smirking* "Moon! Be nice! Echo is probably just scared! He? It? probably has never been powered on before!" *sun says defensively already somewhat trusting echo/eclipse*

Eclipses/echos POV
*So...I guess my name is echo now...interesting...it also seems like I have gotten more sensitive overtime and they apparently don't know I'm eclipse it seems like? maybe that means...I CAN HAVE A NEW START!?*

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948 WORDSSSSSS IM SO PROUD OFF MYSELF!!! :} anyways thx for reading this! Next part i will have a picture of what eclipse well...echo looks like! Let me know if you like this remake so far! The Original Eclipse deserves a redemption arc!

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