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☙ The OT7 Haunting by LAJoyner
Title : 5/5
The title illudes to the idea of the BTS (OT7) being haunted.
Cover : 5/5
The color scheme of the cover gives off that spooky-haunted vibe with the dark grey's and foggy-ness used. The title and blurb are both clear and easy to read, along with the authors name.
Description : 7/10
The blurb gives the overall impression of the main theme, but there are some questions that can raise confusion for the reader. For example you mentioned the OC character as being excited to help with interior design, and a wandering spirit. However it is not mentioned at all that the OC might be the spirit. Reader's may be thrown off thinking this is a book where the OC is an original friend to the members and has nothing to do with the spirit, which could be misleading.
Plot : 15/15
The plot is very creative. It is interesting to see the POV of the OC (who is the spirit) and their feelings towards the members once they buy the building. It is also interesting that you added a dark element to the story to really give it that haunted vibe, making the OC have to run from and seek help from the dark entity that has been coming for her.
Vocabulary : 10/10
I did not run into any issues with vocabulary. Everything is spelled correctly and the vocabulary used is at a level that is accessible to many readers.
Grammar and Punctuation : 13/15
There are some grammatical errors throughout the book. Mostly around dialogue tags where the commas and periods need to be switched. For example in chapter 1- 'Suddenly, he stops and visibly shivers, "Did you feel that chill?' - There should be a period after shivers. - Suddenly, he stops and visibly shivers. "Did you feel that chill?" - So it would read like that. There are more instances of this throughout the book.
