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The precinct’s fluorescent lights buzzed softly above, casting a sterile, lifeless glow across Carter's cluttered desk. Papers and case files stacked precariously, scattered cups of stale coffee lining the edges of his workspace. The hum of the office was familiar, the constant drone of ringing phones and low murmurs from his colleagues. But Carter’s attention was fixed elsewhere.

At the far end of the room, near the whiteboard, he stood alone, arms folded, staring intently at the sprawling map and notes he had spent days piecing together. His hand, still poised with a marker, hovered above a tangle of numbers, dates, and images, all linked together with thin red string. Each connection a puzzle piece in the case he had nearly worn himself out on: The Train Serial Murder.

Carter’s eyes traced the lines on the board, the familiar scenario unfolding in front of him—locations, victims, timelines, all pointing in a maddeningly circular pattern. A murder in the city, another in a neighboring suburb, then another on a different route. The victimology had a clear pattern: random, unconnected individuals, all killed in a specific way, on specific days. But it didn’t add up. Who was behind it? And why were they doing it?

He scribbled another note, his mind whirring. There was something he’d missed, something that didn’t sit right. He reached up and drew a line connecting the final red string, the last point in the chaotic web of the map. It led to the same place every time: a cryptic address on the outskirts of town.

But why that address? Carter’s eyes narrowed. Every instinct in him screamed that he was getting closer, but the answers felt just out of reach.

He blinked, and for the briefest moment, the world seemed to distort—just a flicker, a twist at the edge of his vision, as though the room itself was breathing. Carter paused, shaking his head to clear the fog from his mind. He rubbed his eyes and looked back at the whiteboard. Something felt wrong.

There it was again—a sudden, jarring sense of recognition. The map he was working on, the locations, the scrawled numbers, the routes—they were all from somewhere else.

The room seemed to tilt for a moment. Carter blinked rapidly, unsure if it was exhaustion or something more. But there it was again—the distinctive shapes on the map, the places he’d marked with circles and Xs. They were... Dan's notebook.

His pulse quickened as he stepped closer to the board, staring down at the pieces. His fingers brushed against the map, the scrawled notes, the bizarre sketches—this was exactly the same.

At the top of his pyramid-like mind map, above the murder locations and connections, a large question mark had been written in bold, dark ink. The thing that had haunted him for weeks. The one question that refused to leave him:

Who is the Train Killer?

But now—now it wasn’t just a question. The mind map had become something else entirely. The markers on the whiteboard looked... familiar. Carter’s breath caught in his throat as he compared it to a page in Dan’s notebook—the one he’d come across just a few days ago, tucked between the scribbled paranoia and cryptic ramblings.

He had tossed it aside then, written it off as the nonsense of a man who was barely holding onto his own mind. But now—now it was all too familiar. The same street names, the same landmarks, the same patterns of movement. The same people. Even the numbers in the margins matched.

Carter stumbled backward, his heart pounding in his chest. This couldn’t be possible. Dan—the man who had recently come to the station, the one who had spoken of strange visions and nightmares, the one who claimed his new eyes had shown him the truth—his notes, his jumbled memories, his insanity... It was all right here, on this board.

He couldn’t breathe.

His eyes flicked to the corner of the room where his desk sat, and he noticed it then—Dan’s notebook, the one he had absentmindedly left on the desk, still open to a page of chaotic, disjointed thoughts. The man had sketched out the very patterns Carter had been working on for weeks.

"Jesus Christ," Carter muttered under his breath, the words heavy with disbelief. His mind was racing, trying to make sense of the impossible connection. Was this just coincidence? Or was there something more?

His hand hovered above the whiteboard, unable to stop itself. The marker felt cold as he traced the final line. It wasn’t supposed to make sense, but there it was. All of Dan’s scribbles, all the paranoia, all the dreams, they were lining up—almost like a map, a guide to something that neither he nor Carter understood.

And at the top of it, looming above the chaos, the final question mark.

Who was the real killer?

Carter blinked, trying to shake off the dizziness. His thoughts were becoming tangled, spiraling out of control. The notebook, the dreams, the maps—they couldn’t be connected, could they? He turned his gaze back to the board, only for his stomach to drop as the truth started to crystallize.

What if the Train Serial Killer wasn’t just a criminal he was hunting? What if it was someone else’s twisted reality, crossing into his own?

The realization was horrifying, yet undeniable. And as the pieces of the case began to shift and rearrange in his mind, Carter felt his grip on reality begin to loosen.

His pulse raced, and for the first time in years, the precinct—the familiar hum of the office, the safe confines of his desk—felt suffocating.

Had he just uncovered something that was meant to stay buried?

And was he now a part of a nightmare he hadn’t even realized he’d walked into?

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