Disclaimer!!!

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I do not own Criminal Minds or the show's characters. This story will have some not very realistic elements throughout the story and they are put for more effect and add to the plot. If you think about commenting to criticize the fact it's not extremely realistic, don't bother, this is quite literally fan fiction. Altough, constructive criticism will be appreciated, of course as long as it's not intended to be insulting and/or offensive and I genuinely would like to know how I can do better. This is a new story, despite the same name (I couldn't think of a new name lol). There is changes and the story won't be as unrealistic as the first I made (atleast that's what I have in mind). Comments and feedback is much appreciated!! The first real part should be released this week, perhaps even tomorrow if I find the time to finish it (it's at 600 words right now and mostly original dialogue). I haven’t yet made up my mind on which specific episode it will be starting so yeah. TW: regular gory case stuff yk what it be like, idk what more I should put. Will include case dialogue from the show ofc. Thanks for reading and that should be it ig.

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