Surf,Love,Drama

Prologue

My name is Nevaeh. I lived in Ohio from when I was 10 till I was 14. Before I lived in Ohio I traveled the world with my mom. She was a world famous surfer. She won almost every competition she competed in. Our actual house was in Myrtle Beach in South Carolina. On my 10th birthday we were out surfing when there was a giant storm. Waves were crashing everywhere. At the time my dad was at
work making surfboards. I paddled into shore as fast as a I could. I looked back from the beach. I looked for my mom. I couldn't see her or her surfboard anywhere. I went to put my board in the truck thinking she might have seen the waves and called me in but I didn't hear her. I didn't see her in the truck. I ran back to the beach. "Mom.......Mom........Mom I am scared." I screamed. I than saw her surfboard broken in half. I went out to grab the pieces so I could still have something of her with me. I pulled the back half out of the water. What I saw than haunted me forever............

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