Hey...... How's everybody been? It feels like forever since I posted in this book. Did you know it's the only book I ever fully finished and was proud of at the time? So proud that there's a second book called "Forgive Me Father". However, the second book I let fall by the wayside and never completed. It's sad because I love this story and I love Pax and I've never truly given up on it. However, every time I go back to it I cringe at the poor writing, spelling errors, and choices I made with these characters. I can't just keep writing it without fixing it, but I can't just fix and finish the second book without fixing the first one. So that's what I'm doing. I'm rewriting the books. Fixing it and making it something I can read back on without cringing.
I'm not sure how long it's going to take me because it took me a little over a month to finish writing chapter one. My question is, where do I post it? Replace these chapters with the new ones or as a separate new book? Please let me know.
I see all the likes and comments and favorites, I know that for some reason you guys like this story however flawed it may be in my eyes. I just want to do right by you and by Pax. I appreciate you reading, and please let me know your thoughts, thank you 😊
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Oh Brother -book one- *under revision*
FanfictionBruce thinks its time to have a female in the house, but with four boys already how will he handle a fifth child? and how will she handle having 4 new and very different brothers? Ages: Dick=17 Jason=16 Tim=14 Damian=12 Pax=10 mild language and I'...
