Exodus academy

The beginning...

Chapter 1

A/n: hey guys...this is my first story, so I really need your votes, comments and all that other stuff....
The pic above I what I imagine Theo to be like however you can imagine him anyway you like.

Soooo here's the story I hope you like it, here it is:

Theo
It was one of those nights that that you couldn't see a single cloud in the sky.

I was outside for an evening walk...I almost never stayed at home. My foster parents always gave me a hard time... jackasses.

Well...I never knew my parents, they died when I was very little. No-one knew how, no one knew anything about them. It was like they didn't even exist.

I just kept walking, deep in thought I didn't notice the strange fact that no-one was walking around tonight nor that I had cornered through a dark alley,I didn't notice the two strange figures steppimg out of the shadows. Holy shit...I meant like literally stepping out of the shadows. They both wore black cloaks, but by what I could see they looked wierd. However...something happened that drew my attention...something impossible...something that sent chills down my spine right down to my core....one of them sprouted wings!! I backed up into a more lightened area...out of the alley. That was when I saw them clearly...this was no human. Its eyes were pitch black, like an endless abyss that could consume you by just looking...it had several rows of small shark like teeth. I froze in terror.... unable to move.... unable to scream....I just stood there shaking in fear.That was when it came at me...with speed so fast I could barely see it.

I cross my hands in front of my face in an attempt to block the incoming attack from the... thing! I scream"oh my G...!!!!!" ...Silence... for that moment nothing moved, like the earth was frozen.

I opened one eye. Expecting my head to have been rolling on the ground by now. That was when I saw it....

The devilish smirk that had been on this creature's face just a while ago had been wiped clean, and had been replaced by something that actually surprised me....fear.

At that moment I realized what was happening. The monster in front of me was frozen in midair, and was quaking like it was a bug and I was some kind of extermimator.

"Woa.."I said amazed. As I lowered my hands from my face I saw a blue aura, that can only be described in resemblance to a pale blue flame, hovering inches above my skin. As I looked into a nearby window I saw my eyes also glowing Crystal blue.

"Wow.."I laughed. Looking back to the creature in front of me,..still horrified and frozen in midair. As I took a step towards it. The creatures eyes widened....then it immediately tured to dust.

Before I could marvel or freak out at what I had just done. I felt gravity triple on me and all the power I felt just a few seconds ago leave me."what the heck."I said as I fell to my knees then flat on my face.

I had totally forgotten about the second monster till I heard it sceam."you asshole!!!!you'll pay for that!!!". I was on the verge of unconscious. I heard the monster running toward me screming bloody murder, but I also heard something else.

Someone stepped in front of my nearly unconscious body. Then I heard them snap their fingers. Then I heard the monster scream again., but this time out of pain. I smelt smoke! I heard a female voice just before I passed out. We've finally found you....Lord furian.

A/n; so...I hope u guys liked it...umm...im gonna post some pics of theo later but for now I just wanted to write the story.

Sorry it's so short...I'm just testing if anyone will actually read it...but if someone does the next update will be wayyyy longer.

Watch out for the next update. Its gonna be awesome! (Revealing who the mystery girl is, Theo is also going to the academy. And later on im gonna give the awesome story of the 5beings. Till then pleaseeeee

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