Proof Of My Worth (Discontinued)

I Need Ideas

A/N: I'm gonna be real here. I'm stumped.

I know how I wanna start the reboot, but I don't know how I should go about it.

I don't plan to make this a betrayed Jaune story. No, I'm sticking to my original idea. I'll just....... Switch it up a bit. And probably give him a small harem of two girls. Three at best, but no more than that.

If any of you have ideas, feel free to put them in the comments. But be sure to label them so I can look through and organize them better.

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Characters: OCs, cannon and fanmade alike. You should think about, what role should they play? How would they be relevant? How would they affect the story going forward? Are they human, faunus, or an other worlder like Andito? (Crosser, author, surveyor, etc) Do you want me to expand on the Moratana clan?

Events: I'm planning to extend Jaune's training arc to cover multiple chapters instead of just one. Maybe even make it an entire book to get the point across. Questions to ask here are, what kinds of events do you want to see? Should I broaden out Jaune's training to other worlds with similar powers without making him too OP? Any battles or conflicts he or anyone should cover?

Situations: This essentially covers anything what Jaune or the other characters would get into. Fights with the factions (Ozpin, Salem, the SDC, the White Fang, other Crossers, etc), comedic relief scenarios, character growth, etc. Or even situations within the Moratana clan.

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To be frank, I already have some ideas, but I'd like to hear your thoughts on them.

1. I'm going to make Andito and the Moratana clan a bit jerkish, but they still maintains their core values and genuinely want to do good.

They absolutely hate arrogant fools and cowards. The Atlesian elite chief among them, so expect them to throw some jabs at Atlas and break several of the most prideful characters in the show. As for Jaune and the other teams the clan trained, expect them to do the same to Weiss, Blake and probably Yang. The clan themselves will take it further and crush people like Glynda and Winter.

Spoiler alert, the Moratana make an ally in a very unlikely place. Try and guess who. (Codename: Tundra)

2. I plan to have the Moratana launch a raid on a human supremacist town and level it entirely. Which in turn, allows team CRDL to meet them before they became no-name background characters and bullies. Meaning I plan to enact something I originally had as an idea into reality.

I won't just make them better, I'll make them great. New weapons, new armor, new skills and even new semblances. You won't be able to recognize them. You may even come to like them, or probably hate them even more. Idk......

So yeah, expect team CRDL to be just a strong as Jaune in the future. And while not bullies or racist, they're still not the most pleasant people to be around. Cardin especially, but the rest are manageable.

3. To train the Moratana students, I plan for Andito to use gimmicks and resources from other worlds that can be passed off as normal on Remnant. Crystals and crystal powered weapons from Strom Hawks, physical training from the Zoldyck estate and Nen from HunterXHunter, total concentration breathing on a minor scale from Demon Slayer, etc.

In addition, I'll even add concepts like a status window from the Gamer and Sword Art Online so they can see their progress clearly. Although it won't do anything to accelerate their progress or turn them into game characters like Jihan. And even dungeons that allow you to mine for materials and collect drops from defeated monsters. That would definitely come in handy for training and keep them independent from the Kingdoms.

4. I'll definitely be expanding on the Moratana clan. Meaning you'll get to know their names and read what kind of people they are.

Considering who their leader is, expect them to be badasses with a bit of attitude. Or jerks with hearts of gold. Your pick.

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That's all I've got for now. Let me know what you think and comment. I hope you have interesting suggestions. I can't wait to read them.