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Will's POV (Will's death)

I don't know what I'm doing. I can tell there's something wrong but I don't know what. Last night I was hanging out with Christina and Tris. This is insane! I've heard about Divergents but I'm not one! How do I know I'm doing something wrong?! I walk around the corner of a house and I hear someone speak into my ear.
'Do it, Will, shoot her.'
Shoot who? There's nobody here. Then I see her. Tris. She's shooting at some other Dauntless traitors. Then she sees me. She's freaking out, calling my name.
"WILL!! WILL IT'S ME! PLEASE! WILL!"
I'm trying to answer her but I can't. I can't do anything! That voice. It's keeping me from helping Tris. 'Do it, will. Shoot her.' I don't want to! My gun's raising. What's going on?! I can't stop myself!
"WILL!"
"WILL PLEASE!!"
I can't! I can't do it! Tris tries one more time to call for me but I can't do anything. And then she does what I never expected her to do. She shoots.
I feel pain for a second but then I feel blood, warming my insides, rushing like it's trying to help me die quicker. The last thing I see before my eyes shut is Tris, holding her mom. Crying. Then I fall away, into a sleep I'll never come back from.

That sucked so bad! Well, I'm trying. Ha.