I don't think this is a essay though!My reading teacher introduce to us -PARAGRAPHS-Days passed she said that we make our own paragraph.Also there are 3 major paragraphs:Expository,Inform and descriptive.There is a persuadive one.Also the 1st and last sentence should be connected.The same idea but not the same words.
Also men or teenage men out there:Look at the picture.You might win you crush affection.Comfort her.So you can finally be a stronger man.Look at the video,if it doesn't work,comment!Also you owe me if your crush likes you back ;)
Here it goes:
The Essay
''I sat in my seat,listening to the voices.Behind me.The new girl and my BEST FRIEND.I don't thinks she's my best friend,I still-I don't know.She's still my friend but we act as strangers,or only me-''
I stopped reading my story.I'm currently writing this because it might become a very famous story in the future.Im a 12-yr old girl,who who is a writer and found her talent 1yr. ago.Last 2 months ago school started.I'm failing some of my subjects but I kept making excuses but in truth ,I don't focus on things I don't want to do.Now I made a decision,I'm gonna improve the things I'm good at.That is why I'm writing.I'll show them all that I'm worthy at the top section.Or because I don't want to be left.
I took a big breath and heard the laughs from my best friend and the new girl!She is a selfish friend!Thanks to her this story,''The Selfish Friend'' was created.She replace me because the new girl is more smarter and better than me.
Everytime she makes a story or an essay,I get angry.She is already smarter and meaner than me,does she really need to do something I really love.Ever since my best friend are friends with her I kept thinking ''I'll show them all my true potential ''but I know I will never have the confidence tho win.I again hear them laugh behind me.I miss my best friend.In cue,heavy rain poured down,like my tears fighting to get out ,and my barrier going to break.But I wrote it in my essay.
Few days later,I still miss her.I know that God knows this,so her part is over,or if I stick with her ,I will never go anywhere.The only good thing that happen this past months is that my crush said''Hi'' to me.I already knew that he have a crush on me.Then my happiness is gone because my best-friend said that the new girl's crush is my crush.I wrote everything in my notebook.
The time has finally come to hand up my entry.I entered a contest because of anger,depression and sadness.Now,I really feel un-confident.I don't think this is good.I might have bad grammer,wrong spelling ,my sentence form ..is messed up!But when I heard the new girl answer a correct answer,a correct answer.I got mad and made-up my mind.I'm passing it,just hearing her voice ...makes...makes..makes....my blood boil!
I trust in God's way but the new girl commited the 10 commandment.You shall not covet anything that belongs to your neighbor.I'm just really sensitive and I hate it but me and my ''best-friend'' always hang-out and I remember a lot of memories together.
The next 3 days after I passed my entry.I caught a cold.I didn't go to school but I had a lot of time to think.Do the popular girls hate me?because I saw popular girl being mean, or acting different, to me.I also thought about the essay.Should I tell her and let her red what I feel? No,I won't because I feel like a fool and some reasons.When I returned,I found out that my entry in a international contest!I also won the contest!I was so happy.My ''best-friend'' only said''Congratulations'',all of the people I know from school said''Congratulations'' Even the staff.Because I made it to a international!My crush didn't say''Hello'' or ''Hi'' he would only smile.I,the girl who always thinks in her mind when class are are going-on.Now I'm sitting in my chair waiting for the bell to ring,so tomorrow I can go to another country to participate for the Top 5 best essays in Europe :)
Update this part is located when she came back to school part=
When I returned to school I found a new friend.I was happy really happy,there was this warmth I really like.Then a few hours later New girl,with my''best friend'',ruin it.Kept on talking,talking and talking,like I wasn't there.My best-friend seems lonely and I just left.I said''(AUTHORS NOTE: something that I forgot,sorry) But in my mind.
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Next chapter is the Essay..or something found in the 1st chapter
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GOAL: FIND THE MORAL!
What if this was you in that situation.What's the lesson you learn?
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The Selfish Friend
De TodoHello, if you are a teenager and has a friend this is a book for you. You friend is very valuable, they are your greatest treasure but you must be careful, you must know if they are lying.
