Chapter 7 reritten 2025

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Me and these errors are about to throw hands

Rewrite and publish Attempt 34

Me and Ruby was going up an elevator...But she for some goddamn reason pressed every button on the damn console

Elevator door closed

ding.....

Elevator door opened

ding......

Door closed

ding.....

Door open

ding....

Closed

Y/n:I am never taking you on elevator rides ever again...

Ruby:(laughs shyly) Sorry.

The elevator finally made it to the top

Y/n:(sighs)Freedom at last.

Ruby:(towards ozpin)Sorry it took so long. Someone accidentally hit all the buttons on the elevator on the way up here.(looks at Y/n)

I turned around and looked at Ruby

Y/n:Don't you look at me with those eyes.

I turned around again to face everyone else

Oh so the second picture works now?

Ozpin:Thank you for coming, Y/n and Ruby

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Ozpin:Thank you for coming, Y/n and Ruby. How are you two feeling?

Ruby:Okay I guess. I'd feel better if my bad guy catching record was O for three.

Y/n:Look at me Ozzy. I. Am. MISSING! my eye. It's gone! Not only do I have half a braincell I also have half the vision!

White suit Jackhole:Yes,we can see that.

Y/n:Well I can't. Oz? Who's the Jackhole?

Ozpin:That is General Ironwood.

Y/n:General? Bullshit. Now why are we here?

Ironwood:(sighs)Insults aside. I feel it's appropriate to let you know that I think what you two did last night is exactly what being a huntress and huntsman is all about. You recognize a threat, you took action and you did the very best you could.

Ruby:Thank you sir.

Ozpin:Now, the general here has already informed us of the events that...transpired last night, but now that you've rested and recovered, we were wondering if you had anything to add.

Y/n:Recovered!? You gave me one night!

Glynda:(ignores)Was anyone else with her? Did she look familiar to you at all?

Ruby:I..I don't know. She was wearing a mask and she never said anything to me. But I know she fought with glass. I don't think that was her semblance though. Her clothing lit up whenever she attacked.

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