She's The One (old verison)

Chapter 23

new characters (names, looks, etc.)

Melissa - kind of short with short dark hair and blue eyes kinda crazy always talking to her self and inanimate objects then when she notices people she just smiles to them and walks away. (OliviaLinseman)

Jasmin - 5'6 around petite short pixie brown haircut green eyes shy timid innocent 16 year old does what she is told and does not talk back Max's mate Alex's friend (babuiloveu)

Jess - short blond hair that can be spiked and brown eyes about 5'10 and 170lbs muscular

Brandon- short brown hair and amber eyes about 5'11 185lbs broad shoulders tan skin

Ki - tall some muscle Hazel eyes and long blond hair that goes above his eyes

Steven - cute baby face dark blond hair with bright blue eyes short 5'8 small muscles (sgillman32)

Aden - 6'1 tan spiked black hair green eyes 6 pack (nellybell)

chris- 6'3 buff including 6 pack blond hair blue eyes and tan (redfledgling)

thanks to all of you that gave me a character

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Chapter 23

i pulled up to max's house when i got out of the car there where all these sents that i didnt reconize they smelt bad i walked up to max's house and opened the door i never knocked but this time i wish i did knock because when i opened the door max and about 8 people and max where fighting about how to kill tyler

"i say we hold the girl hostage then attack tyler when he comes to get her" a boy i knew named miky

"just attack the house at night i know that the tv brock the last time we where going to but its not going to happen again" jasmin said

that was all i heard before i was grabbed i tryed to get free but i couldnt the guy how was holding me was to stronge for me to get free

"alex how much did you hear you bitch" jasmin snarled at me wow i thought we where friends

"nothing i just walked in" i lied

"she's lieing we cant let her go back to tyler and tell him are plans" another boy said

"lets just kill her" another said

"max whats going on where friends why would you want to hurt me and my mate what did we ever do to you" i yelled i couldnt believe this ive know max my hole life and here he was trying to kill me and my mate

"you should ask your mate before i kill him ill let you ask him how about that alex" he said with pure evil in his vocie this was not the max i know and loved this was much worse something he was not and animal

"take her away" he said before i could say anything else i was hit from behind i saw blackness then i dont remember anything

i was going to stop there

tylers pov

my head hurt so bad i thought it was just a sudden headack but then i felt like my heart was being riped out of my chest the pain was so bad that i fell to the floor in front of my whole pack we where having a meeting everyone was asking me questions like are you okay what happened

"son whats wrong" dad asked

"my.. heart feels like its been riped out and my head hurts like fuck" i said thought my teeth

"alex is in trouble thats her pain your feeling son where is she" dad asked panicket when he said that i pushed away the pain and ran to my car alex told me where maxs house was i had to get to her fast she was hurt i could hear people behind me it smelt like alexs brothers cole and mark and hers and my dad all following me

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sorry i know that your all going to kill me but im sorry