Chapter 1

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Jack voice

This is the story is how I died, no just kidding and this story isn't  even my. It a story about a young girl and it all started when sun. One drop of the sun fall from the sky into the earth and golden magic flower grow from the ground. Then suddenly old woman came out of no where. Came up to the flower. You mite want to remember her  because she kind of important.

Centuries past, that grow a kingdom that was ruined by beloved king and queen. The queen was having a baby, but she got sick very sick and that when people hope for her to get well or in this case golden flower.

(Magic golden flower)

Old women cam out behind the rock and told you she was important. So back to the point, this old women mother Gothel keep the magic flower her to herself And all she had to do is to sing  a very special song.

Flower, gleam and glow

Let your power shine

Make the clock reverse

Bring back what once was mine

Heal what has been hurt

Change the Fates' design

Save what has been lost

Bring back what once was mine

 Gothel turned back into a young woman and yeah creep.  She cover the magic flower with a hut that was made of leave, stick and some ropes. When she turn around, she hit the hut and the hut fall into the water. She hide behind a big rock and two guard came from the kingdom. They saw the flower, yell we find it and dig out the flower and taking back to the castle.


At the castle


When they got inside, they put some water into a bowl full with water and put in the flower. Then give bowl to the queen to drink. The queen give birth toe new baby princess and give you a hint that Elsa. They went out to the balance and left a lantern into the air. Their where joy in the kingdom that had a little princess and the queen live.

But sadly some bad had to happen and that night around midnight. A  young woman climbed up to baby Elsa room and when got to the top. She start to sing  flower, gleam and glow yeah you know how it go. Yeah back to the story, Elsa hair started to  glow. Gothel got a little bit of Elsa hair and cut the piece hair. 


The piece of hair that Gothel had wasn't glowing any more. She gasp when her hand all old. So she pick up Elsa and went the balance. But Elsa stared to cry, that when the king & queen came in. Old woman holding Elsa and jump of the balance.  The king yell for he's guard, tell him. To have a show party for the lost princess. They couldn't find the lost the princess.


In the forest  ( Elsa is seven now)

Their was a tall tower and inside that tower was Gothel hide Elsa. Elsa didn't know that she was kidnap by her real parents. Elsa sing the song that make her hair glow and Gothel is brushing her hair. She back a young woman and let out a big breathe.

 ( E : Elsa G: Gothel) 

E : mommy why can't I go outside

G : the world is a dangerous place and you need to safe. Okay snowflake.

E : okay mommy

But Gothel can't hide everything from Elsa. Elsa walking to the window and opening the window door. Elsa saw some light that only came on her birthday. The king & queen let out lot of lantern and hope that one day their little princess comes home.





Hey this is reegs12

So this my first story and I hope you all like the Jelsa version of tangled. So comment tell me how you like the story. I try to post more chapter of the story and after school and if have any of idea for this story dint be shy to tell me your idea.





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