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kaylea2003 , and trumpet_is_the_best

This was kaylea2003 's entry.

Abbey's POV

"What have I done?" I whispered under my breath. Heath layer there bleeding and in pain. "Heath, I'm sorry... I w-was just mad." I tried to explain. "ABBEY ITS NOT OK!!!!!!!!! JUST.... GET OUT OF MY HOUSE!!!!!!!" He yelled at me pointing at the door. I ran out of his house crying my eyes out because of what I did to my, not only favorite, but ONLY boyfriend. I continued to run all the way home....

Anny's POV

"Hey Abbey! What's wrong?" I said to my bestie/ sister who ran in crying. "I-I hit Heath and he's bleeding and h-he kicked me o-o-out..." Abbey said sobbing. "You... WHAT????? NOW WHY IN THE WORLD WOULD YOU HIT MY BOYFRIEND???????????" I yelled at my sister. "I'm sorry, I didn't mea- wait... Did you just say BOYFRIEND?????? IM DATING HEATH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" She screamed at me. "Well I'm sorry sweetie he told me he broke up with you.." I said. "WELL HE DIDNT!!!!" She ran into her room and cried herself to sleep.

~The Next Day At School~

Abbey's POV

I walked through the school gates to start my Day at Monster High. I didn't talk to anyone today and only one monster realized that... Guess who... Lagoona.....

Lagoona's POV

I seen that Abbey was keeping to herself all day. She is usually a bubbley ghoul and I haven't seen Heatgh at all since his party. I walked over to Abbey who was reading something in her locker. "Hey Abbey. What'cha reading? " I asked. She jumped. "Oh , uh, nothing." She said shoving the paper in her locker. "Ok. Are you ok? You haven't been very happy lately." I asked. "I'm fine, its just that I really messed up last night." Abbey told me. "Oh... What happened?" I asked again. "Well, after everyone left I was all alone with Heath and my anger got the best of me. And, I punched him and I got to him bad to where he was bleeding. Then he yelled at me and kicked me out. " She replied. "Oh my ghoul Abbey!! What have you done???" I exclaimed. I ran to the creepateria to let the ghouls know why Heath was gone.


trumpet_is_the_best 's entry

Abbey is running away, running for dear life, only thinking of why she did that. She knows he is a big flirt but she couldn't believe he kissed the other girl after she loved him and proved it. Life is unfair, it sucks to have to hurt your boyfriend when all you want to do is kill him for breaking your heart and more than once. All she thought was if Heath tried ever to kiss or hug her..... He wouldn't live to see the next day. Why? Because she would kill him!!! She feels like her heart has broken into millions of pieces. Abbey doesn't have emotions what is love? All she feels is anger, hatred, deppresion, and sorrow....

Let me know which one you like better. I will decide through votes from you guys!!!
Good luck you two!!

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