Percy Jackson Rants

Betrayal of the Fics

When I first starts Wattpad, my first PJO theme was high school, I was obsessed with those forever, my next was the "Betrayed". I fell in love with one of those fanfictions  and it was by far, the best of that storyline I  have ever read. I soon became obsessed and added like 50 to my library. Dumb move. As I read more, it felt more and more cliche. There are some great ones out their with more unique (not original) storylines.

My Pet Peeves:

1: It's always Percy getting betrayed, and Annabeth is the bad guy.

2. They get back together after he reveals his identity or they become sworn enemies.

3. He doesn't let anyone know his identity. With a cloak, how is a cloak helpful?

4. Chaos/ Void/Artemis  Most of these cliqu-Fics have Chaos, but I have seen Percy having to serve Artemis. Void is just another Chaos one, but with a different name.

5. The team is always our favorite characters who died. Leave them Be!!! Or at least get a Alabaster in there(even if he's not dead[for those of you who don't know what I mean this is in the short story "Son of Magic" by Haley Riodan  ])

6. If anyone reveals themselves, the first people are Silena and Beckendorf. And in some case Bianca. I would get a little suspicious of their Team. 

7 Percy is the team leader, how did he get to that title, what about Luke being the leader.

8. They hate on Jason and Annabeth, and then Percy is replaced.

9. Percy refers to Annabeth as the "B" word in some cases

10: Planet and Galaxy name be like G14376373847P25725U152673Q2

What I'm trying to say is that your betrayal story should be more original. Maybe the seven get Betrayed by some new campers. So they try go with Renya and Nico to work for Hades, in the Underworld , where they find their dead loved ones. Hades establishes them as guards and for 3 years they train till war on Olympus strikes. The camps try to replace the seven + Reyna +Nico, and utterly fail. Try call in reinforcements lead by the skeleton butler that drives Nico to places. The new team of Hades soldiers help the camp, but one by one identities are exposed.  - Tada my paragraph fanfic-

If you have an idea or want to write it PM me, and I will give you a shout out in my next Chapter. ( Next Chapter after you PM me)

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