My Immortal (a Edward Cullen story)

Chapter 1

Abigails pov
It was a sunny Friday. I sat in my 9th grade class watching a movie called 'the most dangerous game' based on a book we had read when they came in. The new students were here. The five of them were perfect. I won't lie they were. 
"Class I would like to introduce you to the new students, the Cullen's" she said a little bit too happy to be in the same room as all three of the new guys. Now that I looked around to see who was paying attention one by one every head looked up just to be hypnotized by their presence.
"This is Alice, Jasper , Rosalie, Emmett, and Edward. " please find a seat where one is empty"
The two girls and two guys  walked to some seats in the middle of the class but the brown haired one started walking towards me. He was staring at me the entire time and now he was coming over here. To the right of there was a empty seat but there was also one behind that was set next to my best friend Allie who was twenty times prettier than me. Of course he wasn't looking at me he was looking at her! He stopped at my desk staring straight at me
"Is anyone sitting here" holy. Shit. He's talking to me say something don't be an idiot I say to myself
"U-uh n-n-no" fuck of corse I have to stutter
" hi I'm Allie and that's Abigail" Allie said
" I could have told him that" I tell her then I look at him when he takes my hand and its freezing!
" its ok. Your friend just got a little excited." he winks and I blush and look away and pay attention to the teacher or at least try to but he was staring at me the entire time. I get out a piece of paper and quickly wright a note' you do know staring is rude right'  I look to make sure the teacher wasn't looking and look straight at him and give him the note. Only then did he take his attention off the teacher. He quickly then hand it back to me
'I'm not staring. I'm observing something beautiful'
I read it quickly and jotted down something quick
'I'm not beautiful Allie is' I gave it to him only for him to give it back a second later. Who can write this fast?!
'You are the most beautiful woman i have ever seen or met , yes your friend is pretty but nothing compared to you, you must understand that I think I'm hopelessly in love with you'
'I've never had anybody say that to me.'
I gave it back to him with a smile but it faded when the bell rang for lunch.
I'm sitting with Allie and my three other friends Emma,cammy,and may when Edward came over and sat by me
"Can I ask you a question"
"yeah" I say trying not to blush I put my head down in embarrassment but he lifted my head up.
"Dont look down I like seeing your eyes, but what I wanted to ask you is, well let me explain before I ask. I noticed that you liked Anges obel and my mother likes her too so my father got tickets to a concert of anges but we had somehow gotten an extra ticket so I was wondering if you would accept the ticket and go with me?"
All I could do by the end of his speech is smile and nod
"Great so its tonight at 8 o'clock so when should I pick you up?"
"I have band practice after school so ill get out at 5:30 and get home by 5:40 so give me about 6:30 to 7:00 ok?"
" Okay see you then" he smiled and walked away. I watched him all the way to his table in front of me. When I looked at his family the little one was happy and the blonde looked sorta pissed off then looked at me in a weird way but I quickly looked away but I could still feel her stare 

~after school at practice~

"Mr. Burch is such an asshole!"said Allie as we had ended our band lap before getting ready to leave to go home when all of a sudden i felt a cold hand on my waist- which stood out cause it was like 90 something out here- scared I jumped around only to find my favorite face in the whole school. My boyfriend Daniel who is a junior and is also the " drummer boy" on the drum line.
"hi" I say but he doesn't say it back. scared I did something wrong I step back.
" I've been thinking and I think we should break up"
"Are you fucking serious you bastard she does anything and everything you ask and your just going to dump her" Allie said saving my life.
" yeah I am actually I found someone better than her and this girl is willing to have sex unlike Miss. virgin over here" he said yelling in Allie's face now
"You know what." I said while pulling Allie away from him"go fuck that bitch in a hole and get Ebola and die there together bye you man whore im through with your bull shit" I said crying now
"come on let's go home and get ready for your date"
"It's not a da-"I started but was cut off by Daniel pulling on my arm
"your dating me and your going on a date?!"
"she isn't dating you anymore you ignorite piece of Shit and yes she is going on a date cause your not the hot guy in school anymore!" Allie said as we got in her mom's car and drove to our houses.
She came over to my house once I was out of the shower carrying one of her favorite sparkly strapless dresses and matching color heels and flat's.
"I thought tonight was worth a little something more so go put these on so i can curl your hair and do your makeup"she said as she went to my bathroom to get everything ready
(Hours later)
It was 6:58 when I was done and Allie was putting all my stuff up in my bathroom to keep it clean because I'm really O.C.D when there was a knock at the door. I opened it to find a rather handsome Edward sporting a really fancy suit -that probably cost as much as it would to get into yale- and surprisingly also the same blue as my dress
"ready to go?" he asked i smiled and nodded. He held out his hand which was still cold but I didn't mind it was just nice to hold his hand in mine. We get to the car and he opened the door and right when he does all I hear is a squeal and a 'I love her dress' following. Instantly I thought of Allie.
"That's Alice and jasper" Edward said as he got into the car himself
"Hi im alice" wow was she bubbly I have a feeling im gonna get a long with her. There was a short hello from jasper but was drowned out by alice
"What's your name"
"Abigail but you can call me Abby" I say quietly but she seemed to have heard me
"Isnt your friend named Abigail to but because it was confusing you gave each other nicknames and everyone else just picked up on it" all I could do was nod. It was weird how she knew that. I was so afraid that they would hate and reject me like daniel.
"We will never hate you abigail" Edward says
"Do you want to listen to music?" I nod and he put Beethoven in the CD player and soft background music starts making me a little tired.
It takes a while to get there but when we do Edward jumps out of the car to open my door. I get out and took his hand that he held out so i wouldn't fall onto the rocking pavement with these heels on that still makes me short compared to him by a few inches and we walk to the door and I see Rosalie and Emmett talking to another couple.
We walk up to them when they turned around and I was shocked. They all looked so beautiful just like Edward.
"Carlisle. Esme. This is abigail. Abigail this is my adoptive parents Carlisle and Esme."
"H-hello"
"Nervous?" Edward said in my ear I shook my head yes and he laughed a little as we walked through the door to go aside the theater.

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Hey guys!! please don't hate me!! I wrote this at the beginning of the school year and it just got worse with school work. Then my high schools think it's fun to have four classes per semester so when I thought I had time to write more I had to study for exams so I'm going to try my best to write as much as I can before the next set of exams then during breaks and weekends I'll write as much as I can then when summer comes around if I'm not done with the story most of my time will be devoted to this story
AS OF NOW ALL STORYS ARE ON HOLD
Sorry but I want to finish this story really fast. So the next chapter will pick up after the concert
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