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Pia P.O.V: Oh my gosh this hotel is amazing! Seattle is so cool it has this earthy vibe! I am so happy that Jaden and Madi worked things out they are just too cute, but I wish Mace was here he is so fun to hang out with and I am really starting to like him like alot. Now, I just need to make Madi and Jaden and offical couple and get Teo and Kylie a couple and I can relax. Ughh being me is a struggle.

Willow: MADII!!!

Madi(from the bathroom): I'm almost done

Mckie: You are taking forever!!!

Pia: YEAH HURRY UP!!

Madi: I'm sorry that I want to look good

Amandala: But what if it's not good enough! 

(Madi comes out wearing this http://www.polyvore.com/show_must_go_on/set?id=67683485)

Pia: I think it is....

Willow: (long pause) YOU LOOOK BEAUTIFUL 

Amandala: I take it back...girl you GAW-GEOUS 

Madi: Thanks guys haha Mckie what do you think

Mckie: I think that if you and Jaden don't work out I might date you hahaha

Pia: Oh you're those types of sisters (playfully rolls eyes and everyone start laughing)

Mckie: Nahh, but for real girl flawless

(Hear a knock on the door)

Madi: AHHH!!! Okk Willow go get it (Willow open's door)

Willow: Hey bro 

(Jaden is wearing thishttp://www.purepeople.com/article/will-smith-reprend-le-prince-de-bel-air-et-revient-au-rap-pour-gabrielle-union_a109303/5  and carrying a vase of roses)

Jaden: Hey uhhh where's Madi

Willow: MADIIIIII!!!!YOUR BOYFRIENDDDD IS HEREEEE!!!!

Madi: HE ISN'T MY BOYFRIEND (Madi yells back from other room) 

Jaden: NOT YET!! (Yells back)

Pia: (from other room) THAT IS SO CUTE!!! 

(Madi walks into the room Jaden is in)

Madi: Heyy (waves)

Jaden: Gawwhh..... You're stunning, I got these roses for you, but they are no competition to your bueaty 

Madi: Awww thank you, but that was really cheesy hahaha (takes flowers and puts them on the table) 

Jaden: Hahaha I know, Shall we go (extends hand)

Madi:Sure!

Willow: OK HAVE FUN LOVE BIRDS!!! Just not to much fun I'm to young to be an AUNT!!!

(Madi and Jaden walk outside the room to where there are rose petals sprinkled on the ground in a path)

Madi: Oh my gosh did you do this?

Jaden: Follow the path, we will see where it leads us (smirks)

Madi: Oh gosh, you probably practiced that line a billion times haha 

Jaden: (Starts laughing) Hahaha maybe..... maybe not

Madi: Whagteverlet's go (starts dragging him following the path and they end up on the top of their hotel where their is a candelight dinner set-up overlooking the city) Oh my gosh, Jaden is this for us??

Jaden: What, no I know how you hate hopless romantics and stuff but the path doesn't stop there keep going (pulls her past the candelight dinner and down the back stairs and into this huge white secluded room on the top floor with glass windows, and the only furniture was a couch, a flat screen tv, more rose petals and a bunch of junk food) 

Madi: Now this is beautiful hahaha

Jaden: HahahI thought you might say that, this is really random but I love your personality and the way I feel around you 

Madi: You lowkey, just read my mind (they watch the movie and then it eneds)

Jaden: Hahaha, so I've been meaning to ask you something (rubs hand on theback of neck)

Madi: I'm listening

Jaden: Madison Mackenzie  Drew, Will you please be my girlfriend?

Madi: Yes Jaden Christopher Syre Smith I will be your girlfriend

(They stare into each others eyes and then Jaden moves in and puts one hand on Madi's cheek and kisses her slowly and passionatley ). 

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⏰ Last updated: May 09, 2013 ⏰

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