Undying Soul (Cyle's back story)

Undying Soul EDITED verson!!!

I decided to edit and change somethings of this short story for Cyle!

I'm will leave the original up for those who like the original!

Hope you all like this!

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7/3/2007

My older sister, Krisa, turned the engine off when she was parked in her spot. We were at Valley Fair and we thought it was going to be the best day of our lives. But it turned out to be the worst and last day for us.

I stood next to Krisa, my older sister, as she bought our admission into the park. I was about a head or so shorter then her, that's because at the time I was eleven and she was seventeen. We both had the same shade of blond hair and light brown eyes, making us obvious siblings.

"Let's go!" she said in her sweet voice with a smile. I nodded and followed her into the park.

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After a day filled of fun and excitement, Krisa and I decided to go on the Wild Thing to end it. This was the biggest and fastest roller coaster in the park.

"N-no dad, we'll be leaving in about an hour. The line here is long and there's a sign here saying we have a forty-five minute wait from where we're standing. OK fine. Love you, too. Bye" Krisa hit the end button on her phone and than pocketed it.

"We'll leave in about an hour," she said as she flashed a kind smile. At the time, I didn't see the annoyance in her eyes. Who or what was she annoyed at? To this day, I don't know. She stayed happy for me.

By the time we reached the front of the line, the sun had started to set.

"Finally. We've reached the front" I heard Krisa mutter. The green cars were linked together like a train. Each car had three rows of seats that seated two people. An usher showed us to the first car and had us sit in the last row with Krisa in the inside seat.

"Welcome all to the Wild Thing," a guy who was probably a couple years older than Krisa said over the intercom, "buckle up and enjoy the ride" he said as he pressed some buttons. The lap rest fell onto my lap and locked into place. The same happened to everyone else on the ride. Then the cars started to pull out and up a giant hill.

"Are you OK, Cyle?" Krisa asked. I shot her a weird look.

"Yeah, I'm fine. Why?"

"You just look kinda scared," she teased as we neared the top.

"You're weird" I joked just as the cars inched over the top of the first hill. This is drop is just a straight down plunge into the green coaster. The cars shot down the light green tracks. I could feel the wind blowing through my short blond hair while looking at Krisa; her hair would have been in someone's face if she didn't put it up. My body jerked everywhere but I didn't care. I was having the time of my life. The cars fell down the last hill before going up another to go down the first turn. Just as the fast moving car began turning the corner, it leapt off the tracks. Fear filled screams filled the air. The world around me suddenly slowed.

"Cyle!" I heard Krisa cry as she slowly wrapped her arms around in a protective way. From that moment, I knew one thing.

I was going to die.

Tears filled my eyes just as the nose of the first car touched the ground. The two cars tipped forwards and landed on top of the eight passengers. My head made contact with the cement and the world around went black.

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When I opened my eyes, all I saw was blackness. I stood up and looked around to see if there was anything in that void. There was nothing. Scared, I started calling for Krisa. She never answered.