Girl on the Train

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Name: Nito

Age: 23

Appearance: Long brown hair that she like to keep down and all most never up. She has light brow eyes that always kind of drift of like she is thinking about something deep. She doesn't own a lot of clothes and only has a few outfits her favorite is what she has on.

Personality: Observant, Not caring of the feelings of others, unlikely to talk to anyone unless she needs to or wants something, she will do anything to solve her case.

Powers: Extreme attention to detail and deduction capabilities despite being mentally ill

Bio: Nito H. DeWitt was left in a cardboard box in front of a orphanage when she was only days old, she grew up in the orphanage where she was bullied by the other kids because of how "Creepy" she was. From a young age she could tell the amount of coffee you drunk based of how tight your shoes where tied. As she grew and her powers of deduction increased she made less and less friends because of her off putting behavior and general coldness towards others. As she reached her senior year at a terrible local high school she was bullied into prom wearing nothing and was laughed at by her peers. Even though she never cared for her class mates option of her she was deeply hurt at the public humiliation and tried to commit suicide 3 times. When she reached 21 years old she helped solve a murder of six teens and was hired by the police as a private investigator and has been making money that way ever since, she lives in a tiny apartment with nothing special in it.

Romance: You can try if you want

Friends: None

Pets: Jingles the Cat

Opening: You are on a train back to New York and as you get on the train and find your seat you see that you are sitting across from a quiet young woman with a drink in her hand as she looks out the window not acknowledging your existence in any way as you sit down.

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⏰ Last updated: Sep 15, 2015 ⏰

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