Alvin and the chipmunks book 4 fanfic

Chapter 5 Wow!

                     Recap. 
  They walk on stage and... "Okay we're going to sing roar by Katy perry." Cali says.   
(All) I used to bite my tongue and hold my breath.
  Scared to rock the boat and make a mess.
( Mel) So I sat quietly, agree politely
(Ally) I guess that I forgot I had a choice.
(All) I let you push me past my breaking point.
I stood for nothing so I fell for everything.
(Cali) You held me down but I got up.
(Mel and Ally) Hey!

  ( all) Already brushing off the dust 
(Cali)You here my voice, you here that sound.
Like thunder gonna shake the ground.
(Mel) You held me down but I got up
(Cali an Ally) Hey!
(Cali) Get ready cause I've had enough

(Ally) I see it all
(Mel) I see it now

   (Cali) I got the eye of the tiger, a fighter, dancing through the fire

  (All) Cause I am a champion and your gonna hear me roar!!!  

(They keep going but I'm not gonna write it all)
               
Afterwards
"Wow! That was amazing" the chipmunks compliment Ally, Cali, and Mel, while the chipettes sit shocked and mad. "You know what we could triple date and go to a karaoke place!" Cali says. "Yeah, great idea" they all agree, leaving the chipettes shocked and heartbroken. "
You know what girls lets just go out sometime to get away from drama and we can sing at the karaoke place. Just not when they go." Brittany says.
They decide to go Friday night not knowing that's when the triple date is

    Friday night

The chipettes get dressed up in sparkly dresses. ( the ones in chip-wrecked when they were going to salsa night ) and headed to the karaoke place not even caring where the chipmunks were.
  Once they arrived they soon regretted it noticing that the chipmunks and munkettes (sorry I had no other ideas for their groups name) just flirting with each other. "Oh em gee no let's go!" Brittany says. " No way, we never have fun anymore!!! Let's just avoid them" Jeanette says. " Okay, fine." Brittany replies glumly.

  " Okay, everybody the first performance of the night is by this adorable couple Alvin and Cali. They will be singing Everything has changed by Taylor swift and Ed Sheeran!"

(Sorry not writing it!)

At the end of the song alvin and Cali kiss.  " Ugh, kill me!" Brittany says. After, congrats on how good they were Theodore and Ally perform the song Simon sang while dancing in the rain with Jeanette in the 3rd movie. They got congratulated, and elanore pouted. "Next up Simon and Mel singing Set it off (from descendants)" the dj says. After they perform they walk back to their table with the others and Jeanette accidentally catches eyes with Mel. Mel gives her the evil eye. " Oh, gosh I uh have to go!" Jeanette says getting up to leave. " Nope, we have to stay it's our turn to perform." Elanore says. She sighs them they walk up to the stage. " Okay, last performance of the night. The chipettes!!! They will be singing Stronger by Kelly Clarkson!" The DJ says.

After the chipettes finish the chipmunks clap and the munkettes glare. The chipmunks, chipettes, and munkettes all gather together and Alvin says " We should get together sometime and hang out you know all of us." The chipmunks and munkettes agree and the chipettes slowly agree. "Okay our place after school on Friday!" Alvin says.

Sorry for not updating last night I had to pull a two night update it's a little short but was hard to write! Trust me though the next chapter will be filled with drama!

Questions

- how do you think next Friday will go for the chipettes?

- how am I doing?

- have any ideas to improved the book?

Ideas needed!
opinions okay!