A crazy life style. (A mindless love story)

I'm cleaning the dishes with my brother Craig and his friends roc,ray,and Princeton. I've know them for a very long time know I'm 16 and my name is-

Craig:"Essence the water is over flowing." He turned off the water and put bubbles in my long jet black hair with blue,red,purple,and green tips in it.

Essence:"MY HAIR!" I yelled they laughed at me "so y'all think that's funny" I said throwing bubbles at all of them.We started having a bubble fight but our mom came in yelling at us (mom=Shae )

Shae:my kitchen! Y'all better clean up this fucking mess before I whoop yo ass Essence and Craig. Roc,ray,and Princeton they will see you at school Monday or 2morrow if they have this shit cleaned up"

But what they don't know is that my mom beat the shit out of me wen she thinks I'm In the wrong not even my brother knows theirs a lot he doesn't know about me.

Will this is my fist story tell me if its good I'm looking for people to be in the story and someone to co-write with me just comment stuff about u and if want to be a co- writer just comment your name and and mindless 143 and ill pick