Hey new and old readers,
Here is the new revised version of prologue to Dark Intentions. I will revised most of the chs 1-9 to so that the plot will be clear, and it tie in with the new prologue.
Hope you like it, better than the first version.
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Five years ago...
The first night of summer and days before school can be officially on break. On this dark night, strangely there was no sound of sirens or honking horns, just a cool breeze blowing through town. A thirteen-year-old girl exited a liquor store. She took out her IPod and put on her earphones, she was supposed to go straight home but she decided to grab a few snacks and didn't realized that it was already dark. Many parents have warned their children, not walk in the streets at night. She ignored the eerie feeling that she was being watched. She crossed over to the other side while humming along to her favorite song as she passed by an empty alley.
At the same time, the dark figures stood in the shadows. There were five brothers dressed in black. They were once human but now, they roam the earth bringing evil with them. They love hearing the sounds of screams and moans, for they're demons prying on mankind. They possess humans and engage in sexual activities, relishing in the bounty of these pitiful souls who hunger for the darkest desires. The Doom Brothers are incubuses and was on a hunt for more souls to claim. On this particular night, the demons watched and were intrigued by this young girl walking alone without the care of what might lurk in the darkness.
The eldest brother took a puff from his cigarette, "Well what do we have here? How about that pretty young thing coming towards us?"
"I wouldn't touch that, she got an angel on her side. Brother, she's too young for what you have in store for her. Lets move on." The second oldest grabbed his brother's shoulder.
Tartan shrugged off his brother's hand. "Haman, shut up. I want her." He smiled and shouted to his other brothers. "Boys, lets go hunting."
Haman put his hand up to stop the others from proceeding, "No, you want her. Go get her. But don't get mad when she rejects you."
Tartan laughed at his brother, but he didn't mind hunting on his own. "Fine, but you boys have to disappear. I have plan to lure her in the alley by her own free will."
Tartan watched the girl approach the alley entrance as he transformed himself into an appearance of an old lady that was bleeding from the forehead. He jumped in front of her, giving her scare and she jumped back.
"Oh, miss. Are you alright?" Priscilla bend down to inspect the lady's wound on her face.
She was wondering where did this woman come from. She helped the woman up and tried to understand her mumbling. "Ma'am, we need to get you to the hospital. I'll call an ambulance for you." She pulled out her phone dialed 911 when the old woman ended the call. "Ma'am—"
The lady interrupted, "My son needs help but you have to check on him first. You can call after you check on him."
"Ok, where is he?"
"He's... in the alley. We were attacked by something and dragged us into the dark. Come. Come now." The old woman said as she tugged on Priscilla's sleeve. The woman let got and ran into the dark alley.
"Miss, don't—", Cilla didn't even finish her sentence when the woman disappeared. She scratched her head as she wondered about the lady's story. From what she could tell that the woman was fast for an old lady and why didn't she want the ambulance. Ok, this is the last time I walk home after dark. I should call 911 and wait here for the cops to show up. Yep, I'm staying right here. No way I'm going into that dark alley. What if the bad guy has a gun? I hate guns. I'm not going to get myself killed for an old lady.
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DARK INTENTIONS
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