Wattpad Survivor

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Summary: *based on the show, survivor*

18 contestants. 2 teams. One island.

When 18 people signup to be castaways on a remote island, they are all excited. The last one standing gets a prize of 2 million dollars, and everyone there is gonna fight for it. But as time wears on, trust will be put to the test. Your character could end up hurting you, and you have to be smart. And then there's the biggest question of all. Who will win? I guess you'll just have to read to find out.

IMO: Ok, this is a book I kind of finishing reading but, he stopped updating and I got mad. Why? Because, my character was Danny and I was happy for a character of mines to be in a book for another author to write about, ya know.

So, when he actually start updating the book, I was excited in each chapter. Danny and the most hated girl, Shayla, would have 'forbidden love' and would manipulate Danny for her to win. Did it work? I never know because, HE NEVER UPDATES!

Other than the updating, he wrote the chapters good when he can. No grammar mistakes and the plot looks decent enough. Little complicated for me to read between two tribes and point of views of EVERYONE and have to remember that... you have to remember everyone's names. Little confusing to me personally.

Him not updating.. I won't hold it against him. He'll get a good rating.

Grade: B+


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