Blue Fire

Chapter 1: Sadly you can't change the past

Terror filled every creak and corner of the planet, At. Every aten screamed, cried, and waited for their savior to come. At, a planet far into the Galaxy, much bigger than any other planet in fact, it had its own space not close to anything, it was always happy until...The Nightmare. The comet that changed everything. Yes, the blue bright shining comet. They called it the Blue Fire. It's been hurdling toward At for 2 years. Even though its 100x smaller then At, atens fear and hope that when the comet crashes into At it will cover the planet in blue fire and throw them all into the depths of hell.

But there's a good side atens say that when they get thrown in hell, the Blue Savior will save them. No aten knows how, but they believe that some how they will be saved.

"Mommy that Aten keeps following me!" said the small aten pulling on to her mothers long dress. Her mother turned around and saw a man, he had dark eyes they almost looked...possessed. He had black freckles and bumps up and down every inch of his body.

Her mother turned around and picked up her now crying child. "Stay away from my child!" the man wouldn't give up. He pounced on the mother grabbing the child out of her soft hands. "Emily!" she screamed as she gets up. "so Emily's her name, hm? How about we change that up a bit?" the man said. His eyes turned red and he grabbed Emily's neck."ccchhh ack!" she suffered while her own mother watched. Her mom watched with tears and fright. Her little aten had only put up a thumps up sign before she fell to the ground as a lifeless body. The man walked over to the innocent lady and grasped her around the neck. She didn't hesitate but, at the right moment she screamed, "Savior! Please come and heal us!"

Just then, the blue shining comet crashed At.